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Lorhelei


"Be happy for me, and for all who fly free"

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Twilight finds a letter on the Golden Oak's Library shortly after her arrival. It's signed "For Twilight" by "Twilight Sparkle".

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Did that future Twilight time travel to put that note?

9940110
Yes. Yes she did it.

The idea is there, but the actual story reads like a converted roleplay session. Work on mixing up presentation of details and reducing the repetitive 'She-she-she' useage and you'll see big improvements in your writing.

9940145
I'll do it. Thanks for your feedback

Now do cool patrol with rainbow dash.

Did she... write that note... to herself?

9940433
Yes. She did.


9940381
Haha, that would be interesting.

My question now is how much does this mess up season 1's, epsiode 1's gags? If Twilight doesn't think as she should be at this point, it takes all the fun out of meeting the Mane 6.

Or maybe I'm overthinking it.

9940663
She still don't know who are those friends the letter talked about.

"despite everything, it's still you"

...undertale reference?

9941087
Yesss <3

Also, the beginning is c:

9941192
Funnily enough, I noticed that too, but then thought "nah. That's way too obvious."

9942725
I'm not that smart, hehe.

Not much I can say other than, really good job on this one-shot. Yeah, future Twilight sending that note to her younger self to reassure her WITHOUT revealing TOO MUCH was beautiful stuff.

9953270
Thank you, thank you very much :")

Love this I wonder if more ponies got a random letter from themselves when theyived there

Twilight watched the 6 go into the Everfree forest, cloaked in the shadows with her magic. This was the fifth time she had left the letter. She could only hope that this time, things would go as normal, restoring the original timeline. The events surrounding Nightmare Moon's defeat were so very fragile.

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That's a story for another day <3

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