Sweetie Belle had always thought it was wrong to be nude in mixed company.
One day she finds out that both her friends family come from nudists families .
this a humanized ponies not equestrian girls . Meaning that the crusaders are preteens .
Will Her friends be able to convince Sweetie Belle that there is nothing wrong with being nude with other at certain times .
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You're off to a very good start
This hurts my head.
Please stop.
This story is just a huge mess. Errors are absolutely everywhere, most of the time I couldn't tell who was talking or if anyone was talking at all. The way you wrote this makes it look like you had no ambition to write this whatsoever. I'm sorry, but this was horrible.
Keep developing the story. Slow down in your typing. This felt rushed, but you have good ideas. Don't stop writing!
This is ironic considering how Sweetie Belle founds a nudists’s club in one universe.
I'm enjoying this so far. However, you are in dire need of an editor, badly.
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If any wants to do a story where the Sweetie Belle switch worlds go ahead
8914211
What?
10362138 I forgot the name of the fic, but that fanfic still exists.
I had a tough day so I continued to read this CHIZ.
I WOULD insert myself applying a bandage to Sweetie Belle, but she's naked so I cut myself.
CAUSE I KNOW WHAT I'm DOING IS WRONG. It's INSIDIOUS, INCREDULOUS and Hey, lets throw in INCONCEIVABLE
I'm not going to say anything but it looks like you need a comment
I feel dirty for imagining this.
When I think Cookie crumbs I try to imagine obese. Is that bad? Or is imagining the CMC naked worse?
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Canterlot High Has A Club About What?!
Am I the only one who's favorited this?
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thanks
Unreadable sh*t. Dislike.
are you sure you don't want an editor? How does that work anyway?
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I would love an editor
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So how does editing work?
10677047
one way is to go to the group looking for editors
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
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Okay now what?
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if someone wants to edit the story they will
10677047
you are a member of the looking for editors and you don't know how it works
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Yeah I'm useless
Again, Aww
10362516
I found Canterlot High has a club about WHAT?
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Good. :D