Every Week Rumble and Thunderlane go to the bathhouse on Tuesday only this week they were busy and didn't realize until they got there it was Wednesday. Wednesday the main room is Mixed Bath Day
The characters are human but the kids are in elementary school as they are in my little pony.
This story may be bordering on a T rating. I don't think the nudity (though non-descriptive), is appropriate for E.
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okay the rating was changed
Grammar, please?
Maybe get someone to proof read your stuff.