Big Macintosh wants to be with Fluttershy. I want to be with Applejack. Big Macintosh is afraid of social interaction. I'm afraid of Big Macintosh. If I can set up my friend with the mare of his dreams, I might just have a chance with mine.
*Told in first person*
I liked this chapter, well done. It is probably one of the few romance fics done in the perception of another character rather than the 2 main ones.
Keep up the giid wirk.
I MA TRACK DIS BITCH
Love the story, mke more plz. Here's scootaloo in a tree
this is lookin good. i like the way the story's being told, or the way its written. you know what i mean.
wonder what went on between Big Mac and Pinkie?
57848 Thanks!
Though I wonder, I'm getting pretty posotive comments and my story has a 3.2 ....
Starting the next chapter hopefuly tommorow, should be up within the week. thanks all
LOVED IT LOED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT 5 STARS NEED MOARRRRRRRRR
quite nice, quite nice indeed. I shall follow this to see where it is goes.
58627 i would have replied to your message, but im using my ipod wich is hardly working and my computers broken. Itll be a while untill i can post chap 2, unfortunatly. By all means, i would absolutly love it if you critisized me! Only seems fair, that is if you want to. Youll notice that i rarely follow my own advice in writing. Feel free to point out any flaws!
62074 About to start chapter 2
I feel bad for Caramel.
64435 Yeah, me too. I'll have to do something about that, won't I... ?
poor Caramel.
i can't WAIT for the next chapter!!
Aw Caramel It's getting pretty good bro keep it up
delightful
'test and projects out the ass' damn those things must stink like ass
You still have a week of school before Christmas?
I thought that most countries (which celebrate Christmas) get the holidays 2-3 weeks before christmas.
78570 i think he's in the us... i get out in 2 days for break...every year winter and spring breack get shorter and shorter...along with thanksgiving breack
78544>>78570>>78588
Yes it stinks Yes I'm in the U.S. and Dammit you're lucky! I get out Friday, and have a week and a half off of school. The Horror
but yeah anyways the story
78718 i go back on the 3rd of January
78722 you poor bastard
78724 i also have a shit ton of projects do then to
I've gotta say, I really like your writing style. Plus, I simply ADORE the summary. Parchment strikes me as a bit of a snarky fellow, and I can't wait to see where this leads.
EPIC LOL
i really like the freeform writing style you are using, like having his thoughts and personality tell the story. keep it up and please update more often
So.....
This dead, or...?
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Sorry to say, I think it may be. I have this terrible habit of not finishing what I start. I'm sorry
If it's any consolation, I am working on something new at the moment
*sigh*. Another gay Caramel story? You gotta give the guy a break, ya know?
Anyway, love the story.
Is it just me, or did I see a Cupcakes reference?
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damn you! There has to be at least ONE hot makeout scene with AJ before you fucking dump all this great shit down the drain! JUST FUCKING CONTINUE! RIGHT FUCKING NOW! I'M TIRED OF THE BULLSHIT AND APPLEDASH SHIPS! THIS IS PROBABLY ONE OF THE ONLY STRAIGHT ROMANCES ON THIS GODFORSAKEN SHITHOLE OF A SITE! SO CONTINUE RIGHT FUCKING NOW!!!
Is this still an active story or have you dropped it or quit?
Wow this story is very nice I'm curled up on my sofa reading it and am having a blast Anyway love the idea your portraing the characters quite nicely keep up the good work