Not really sure how I feel about this, gets a job to find a sword in Vegas, ends up getting recruited by a god, given god-like power, then proceeds to act like it's all normal.
I'll follow to see where this goes, but I really hope you won't make her into a Mary Sue (a character that is powerful, liked, always wins, etc basically a perfect character)
8956144 I think I feel the same way, I honestly like it that some small stuff is different from what I usually dislike, but it goes in a certain direction at the moment that makes me wary.
Mary Sue (a character that is powerful, liked, always wins, etc basically a perfect character)
I thought Mary sue meant bad past and everything like that, but well I agree that this can be bad. How would you call a character that is the opposite? I mean I incredible weak, always lose/hides or needs to be rescued by the ponies or other not exactly strong characters which makes him even more pathetic, etc basically an ultimate wimp which also get's manipulated in his opinions and whatever for the sake of the plot or has to suffer the whole story with a chapter count less than 10 where he get's a break.
I hope you understood how I meant it, anyway half of the time I see eithter asshole characters (Soldiers half of the time), OP chars or wimps which are also not exactly fund to read.
I'm honestly interessted in chase this looked like I would be mean in any way.
8956162 From Wikipedia: "A Mary Sue is an idealized and seemingly perfect fictional character. Often, this character is recognized as an author insert or wish fulfillment."
8956303 Hhhmmm the story description is suggesting that his is only clop, but does this story have a main char like I described, which was the extreme opposite of what he called a mary sue or what is this about again?
8956338 Well okay thank you, it is good to know or at least to remember what it was correctly.
8956408 Yes. You were saying the opposite of a Mary Sue would be pathetic, always need to be rescued, "damsel in distress" if you will. A great example of an opposite Mary Sue is the main character in The Scent.
8956466 Doesn't help that the author of that story has a hard on for psychological torture porn. Seriously, the main character in that story never catches a break and is always being taken advantage of with literally no way out besides suicide. Even then I'm sure the author would bullshit some way for him to come back just to fuck with him some more.
Hell, the author made an entire side story of the main character dying, turning into a lich, and still getting fucked over by the world at large.
8957210 Which is almost as bad. Now, I haven't read this yet, but it doesn't sound much believable that a person has that many bad habits. Heck, if there's too many it could take up valuable words that would better be used for advancing the plot.
Huh, direct and shameless author self insert. It’s almost so blantant that it works wonderfully. I am intrigued. Kudos. Will be tracking for updates.
Tracking, let's see where this goes
Not really sure how I feel about this, gets a job to find a sword in Vegas, ends up getting recruited by a god, given god-like power, then proceeds to act like it's all normal.
I'll follow to see where this goes, but I really hope you won't make her into a Mary Sue (a character that is powerful, liked, always wins, etc basically a perfect character)
8956144
I think I feel the same way, I honestly like it that some small stuff is different from what I usually dislike, but it goes in a certain direction at the moment that makes me wary.
I thought Mary sue meant bad past and everything like that, but well I agree that this can be bad.
How would you call a character that is the opposite? I mean I incredible weak, always lose/hides or needs to be rescued by the ponies or other not exactly strong characters which makes him even more pathetic, etc basically an ultimate wimp which also get's manipulated in his opinions and whatever for the sake of the plot or has to suffer the whole story with a chapter count less than 10 where he get's a break.
I hope you understood how I meant it, anyway half of the time I see eithter asshole characters (Soldiers half of the time), OP chars or wimps which are also not exactly fund to read.
I'm honestly interessted in chase this looked like I would be mean in any way.
8956162
Then you'll get The Scent's main character, my friend.
oh dear god
8956162
From Wikipedia: "A Mary Sue is an idealized and seemingly perfect fictional character. Often, this character is recognized as an author insert or wish fulfillment."
But yeah
8956303
Hhhmmm the story description is suggesting that his is only clop, but does this story have a main char like I described, which was the extreme opposite of what he called a mary sue or what is this about again?
8956338
Well okay thank you, it is good to know or at least to remember what it was correctly.
8956408
Yes. You were saying the opposite of a Mary Sue would be pathetic, always need to be rescued, "damsel in distress" if you will. A great example of an opposite Mary Sue is the main character in The Scent.
Another displaced fic..."snicker"
I'll keep track of this for now.
8956466
Doesn't help that the author of that story has a hard on for psychological torture porn. Seriously, the main character in that story never catches a break and is always being taken advantage of with literally no way out besides suicide. Even then I'm sure the author would bullshit some way for him to come back just to fuck with him some more.
Hell, the author made an entire side story of the main character dying, turning into a lich, and still getting fucked over by the world at large.
Yeah, it's painful just to read. Never found anything more demoralizing (Close to Fall of Equestria bad).
8956144
Oh she is far from perfect, she has just about every bad habit known to man in case you haven't noticed yet.
8957210
Which is almost as bad.
Now, I haven't read this yet, but it doesn't sound much believable that a person has that many bad habits. Heck, if there's too many it could take up valuable words that would better be used for advancing the plot.
Let's See Where This Goes.
I Also Found Somepony That Looks Like Me.
Bladetiger76
Huh, direct and shameless author self insert. It’s almost so blantant that it works wonderfully. I am intrigued. Kudos. Will be tracking for updates.
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didn't even read. yet
had to do gangster rap made me do it.