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the characters are very inconsistent sometimes they act like you think they would then they act like a whole other person
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Yeah I know, that's the point. Something there is altering their personalities.
the chapter is so long and disjointed. Barely any description of anything. Is that on purpose?
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Actually yes or at least for the boss fight at the bottom of the chapter. I tried to be a bit descriptive the rest of the way but there's only so much that I can do.
I like how you’re using Hellshock’s character, Suzumi as a base for your character. One of my favorite characters.
It's bothering me but is it on purpose that in some places it states that it takes place at the beginning of season 4 but it states that they already have the crystal castle which they don't get till the end of season 4
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Actually technically they get the castle beforehand but don't decide to use it until Twilight's Library is destroyed.
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I think either you or I need to rewatch the last episode of season 4 because from what I remember the castle is grown after they use the rainbow power to defeat Tirek and the chest flies to ponyville and sinks into the ground and then grows to become the castle
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Do you remember what happened after the first episode of Season 4?
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I assume you're referring to castle-mania but that episode is about the castle of the 2 sisters and I have gone back and watched the end of the season 4 finale and I was right about the chest so unless this is an alternate timeline in which they get the castle when they return the elements to the tree of harmony (which would work because you've already made it clear some possibly Void-dweller level being is manipulating the world) I don't know how it works
You are quite inconsistent. In your backstory you claim that she was raped but then in conversation you claim she has never had sex before. How about you just say all her previous experiences with that were bad?
I'm confused.
How are they in the Crystal Castle when it shouldn't be around yet?
It didn't appear until after the defeat of Tirek, when it grew out from the box.
By rights, they should be in the Golden Oaks library.
Is this one still going?
What level of maturity is she at? Six years old or some shit?
next ch?