"Peaceful days are coming to a close for Equestia. With the return of an old friend, The Spirits of Harmony must prepare themselves for an adventure filled with danger, love, and an ancient evil's return..." Pairings revealed in the story.
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Ha, I was wondering when you'd finally post this here.
Looking forward to seeing more, dude. =D
I like what i see. On Ch.2 but so far...
5/5
I like this very much, keep up the good work. Looking forward to more! :D
This chapter, adding to the Elements of Harmony? Hmm... Never liked that much, but if pulled off right; this could turn out better than expected...
Also, one of my minor complaints is: The overuse of the word "Confuse" and it's variations. (I.E. Confusion, Confused etc.)
Still, liking this story very much.
this chapter makes me
1010833 Don't you mean
? O_o
1011462 Nope, I mean
1011709 Aw, that isn't nice. D=
Also, Sky, you might wanna consider putting a Trixie character tag, if there is one, since she's gonna be a major character soon. :P
1011875 Ohhh... Trixie. And by
I mean, I like this story very much. 
Words of me
Prepare for Hell..................
luna and princess luna?
luna and princess luna?
Hmmm... Overuse of the word "beast" here. Sorry, but on the positive note: Battle, good. Plot, Excellent.
And here we have the first appearance of one of my favorite OCs I made for VoH. Reading this really brings back memories, man. =D