Ahh, far to rushed...but hey I suppose it is just the first part of a story.
*clears throat. That said, was a good start, and I shall track this story, for reasons of curiosity.
OH! Fun Fact: I found out female horse can breed with Griffons (according to our legends anyway). The hybrids are called Hippogryphes (basically they look the same, but have a horses body in the back instead of the lion body).
1069639 "I'm just not that big on clop right now." ....sorry, im tired
1069685 it's a speed fic, he has to finish a full story in 90 min or so, that kind of quick, so of course it was rushed. and i don't think there are going to be more pieces of this specific story-line, it's a compilation, meaning that there is a going to be a bunch of rushed clop-fics with no relation to each other. (awesome in other words!)
A collection of mature peieces? What is mature about getting off to ponies fucking? written by prompt? So many people use that phrase and I have no idea what it means. 'Written by prompt.' WHat is that?
You're definitely at your best with the long, buildup-y stories, but this is still pretty good for a 90 minute speedfic! A little sad it wasn't longer, but I guess that wasn't the point. ^^'
Totally random: About the "bestiality", it'd actually be "xenophilia", since it is with a sentient race, not an animal :P Overall, it was quite amusing though. Characters was IC enough to be enjoyable
This is honestly the last thing I was expecting.
I probably need to read it, considering I've read most of the rest of your work.
Having read it... my sentiment remains the same.
*sigh*
Let's do this.
....
meh.
Good work nonetheless.
1069576![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
'meh'??
I think you're dreadfully misspellin' 'whee'!![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
1069630
I'm just not that big on clop right now.
Ahh, far to rushed...but hey I suppose it is just the first part of a story.
*clears throat. That said, was a good start, and I shall track this story, for reasons of curiosity.
OH! Fun Fact: I found out female horse can breed with Griffons (according to our legends anyway). The hybrids are called Hippogryphes (basically they look the same, but have a horses body in the back instead of the lion body).
Classic.
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Quality fic. Would read again.
Oh god, I had to stop having dinner because I was laughing too much, and now my face hurts.
10/10 will read again, brb
ee, mindfuck...
good work btw
1069639
"I'm just not that big on clop right now."
....sorry, im tired
1069685
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it's a speed fic, he has to finish a full story in 90 min or so, that kind of quick, so of course it was rushed.
and i don't think there are going to be more pieces of this specific story-line, it's a compilation, meaning that there is a going to be a bunch of rushed clop-fics with no relation to each other. (awesome in other words!
Pffffffft hahahaha brilliant
A collection of mature peieces? What is mature about getting off to ponies fucking?![:eeyup:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/eeyup.png)
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written by prompt? So many people use that phrase and I have no idea what it means.
'Written by prompt.' WHat is that?
And I was listening to irish pub songs as I read this. That made it awesomer.
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1069807
That's why I am tracking... the idea of a 90 minute written story sounds interesting! =p
1070044It's just a basic idea for the story, in this case Hearts and Hooves day, with sex involved.![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
1069807It's actually only sixty minutes, but yeah, that's it.
I need to do some speed fic stuff. Good practice.
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Always gets me with the cursing. I am so relieved he never uses buck. It makes it so damn funny.
Damn, it's like a s'mores; it doesn't fill you up but the flavor is so rich... Well done!![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
1069630![:eeyup:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/eeyup.png)
Hear, hear!
I believe this sums up my feelings of this story: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2qHJ-xcMQ7Y
It sure was entertaining, all the same.
You're definitely at your best with the long, buildup-y stories, but this is still pretty good for a 90 minute speedfic! A little sad it wasn't longer, but I guess that wasn't the point. ^^'
1070903
im pretty sure it's 90 min, at least for this one. reason:
"Time: 90 minutes" is what it says in the beginning of the "first" chapter
1072646Good point, missed that. But the site itself has sixty minute time limit for it's stories.
1072999
They allowed ninety minutes just for that prompt. Usually, it's sixty minutes.
1073048
Love that last line man, I hope you do a Soarin X Spitfire sexty minute ponies story in the future.
*clears throat authoritatively*![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
BRILLIANT!
"Fuck. Hearts. And Hooves. Day."
Best AJ line I've ever heard XD
I am dying.![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
that ending, didnt saw it coming XD
also please put Spike in the "Fum-Times" with the girls too, he needs love too ya know?
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totally not safe for work "what a mane 6 orgy may look like" PORN
I like it.
I also note the 3rd person past tense. Playing with style?
Totally random: About the "bestiality", it'd actually be "xenophilia", since it is with a sentient race, not an animal :P![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
Overall, it was quite amusing though. Characters was IC enough to be enjoyable
So may I introduce to you
The act you've known for all these years,
Sgt. Luna's Lonely Hearts Club Band.
What I thought when I saw the title. I somehow expected the story to somehow make a Beatle's reference.
But overall, an excellent speed fic. Too bad you couldn't continue where the story left off.
Funny, silly, sexy, and fun once more. Sleepless, you never disappoint~![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
The AppleDash scene made me cringe. xD I don't like that pairing.
But I seriously laughed so hard throughout the whole story! Genius!
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