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Gavier


Evergreen's Evergiven may be the best ship, but oh boy does Raritwi come close

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Twilight decides it's time Rarity starts learning how to teleport. That means, tutoring classes. Rarity is slightly less than pleased, especially after seeing what most of said classes appear to be about.

Written on the context of Monochromatic's "The Enchanted Library," around the start of the second arc. But don't worry, it doesn't contain any spoilers past the basics of the AU.

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I liked your writing. But I'm a little confused on what's going on in the story. Is this part of a series?

If the multiverse theory is true, then somewhere out there is a universe where TEL is a rom-com, and you've just convinced me that such a universe would be a wonderful place to visit. A delightful story, with a few darker hints here and there of the larger story this parodies, and some wonderful interactions between Twilight and Rarity that feel very much like the relevant scenes in TEL.

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Look up "The Enchanted Library"

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Ah, okay. This makes more sense. Thanks.:twilightsmile:

That was cute! Some great gags here.

"Well, technically she just levitated in circles, moving her legs as if she was trotting, making the clip-clop sound with her mouth"
I thoroughly enjoy The Enchanted Library and its sequel, but I'll be damned if silly things like the above line do not make Twilight seem just so much more Twilight than she does in the source material.

That ending was stupid and adorable in the best way.

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Thank you!

Honestly, the fic was supposed to be a tad longer, but when I reached that scene the muse hit me with a hammer, knocking me out and possessing my body to write that last line, and I kid you not, I literally couldn't stop laughing after reading it. So I left it as is.

Never read anything this is a part of, but just on its own this was very amusing. You definitely need an editor as there is alot of errors but the ending alone made this worth the read. :pinkiehappy:

The tension was straight-up tangible (unlike Twilight, who was gay, next to Rarity, and a ghost).

I don’t know if that joke is really dumb or really good.

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An ad? In my fanfiction?

It's more likely than you think

"...interwoven dimensions, not too dissimilar to a layered dress, except the dress has an arbitrarily high number of layers, of which most collapse onto themselves, too small to be noticed, but still connected to the rest of the piece. This of course requires an almost absurd level of precision. Imagine moving through them like throwing a needle trough a keyhole at fifty hooves behind you-"

I never thought I needed n-dimensional vectors explained in seamstress terms, but it's nice to be proven wrong and learn new stuff.

Hahahaha, bravo! I can't imagine how hilarious twilight's face would've been. n_n

hey there :) came to message you about something else and then got distracted with this fic.

That title and image are devastatingly good hooks, btw. I literally didn't want to read this as I'm trying to finish writing something, but I simply couldn't resist D:

there was loads that was great to this, so have your review! https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/1038764/rarity-learns-math-by-gavier-recommendation-style-short-review-for-fics-i-would-recommend-but-for-flaws-with-the-format-that-can-be-sorted-with-editing

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omg thank youuuuuu

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*dabs epically*

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