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Comments ( 38 )

A Treesome? Are they fucking in a tree?

10509743
It was supposed to be on a king/queen sized bed lol:rainbowlaugh:

10509774
Might wanna fix that title then lol.

...I swear I've seen that cover art before on a different story. Does anyone know what it is?

10509862
Oh
I didn’t notice that another story had one really I just found the fan art by searching google:twilightsheepish:

10509901
Yeah It looks like it
To be honest there was two other people that had a story with the some pic so it’s probably fine

10509912
I'm personally fine with using the same pic. Not like it's stealing or anything since both fics focus on the 2 girls. So it should be fine

10509921
Honestly I was originally slated to submit this weeks ago but I thought maybe it’s best to save it for Halloween

Also I originally had either DJ Pon 3 or Lightning Dust to be in Indigo Zap’s place

I never read a second person before so it's a strange reading... it's alienism to me when reading it... but it seems good... So the review... time... (wait for it)

Drums rolling.... 7/10

10510016
Thx for the 7/10 I’ll take it :twilightsmile:

My FBI agent is probably asking the head council for a position-change at this point...

10512328
Is that for investigation purposes or is he/she just horny af:rainbowlaugh:

10512339
Probably a bit of both.

Only in a fictional world would someone be this lucky.

Found this story again.

Just found out I never actually read this.

Welp! Too late for that, gotta rake the yard!

10509925
Funny story about Zapping the Rainbow.
It was a free commission the author was doing a while back.
He had several slots open.
I was a horny guy.
I wanted to see a fic with competitive sex between Indigo Zap and Rainbow Dash.
That story was the result.

10594764
I’m horny af too

Is competitive sex what you expected from this

10594768
No.
I just saw this pop up in my feeds cuz it was posted to one of the groups i'm a member of, decided to see if it interested me.

10594769
Well in that case read away
You can tell me what you think back here are under my home page

10594771
All due respect, this is not to my taste.
In and of itself, a perfectly serviceable clopfic.
I just personally prefer my clop/porn to be females only.
Yes i am that kind of degenerate and i somewhat hate myself for it.

10594774
Thx for the feedback
Sorry if it doesn’t interest you

You might not go for this but I’m considering on making a sequel to this so maybe just maybe it’ll have some competitive sex between Rainbow and Indigo.

10594775
If you're considering a sequel, then i will be sure to check it out either way.
I may not find this story to my interest, but it is remarkably well written.
And that is something i can respect.
Though you did forget ONE word towards the beginning.

....until you 16 in high school.

Pretty sure "turned" is supposed to be between to words in bold.

Still haven't read this.

Shit.

Awesome job, my friend! Nicely done. :raritywink:

10926484
AAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!

I actually impressed Harms Way:pinkiehappy::heart:

Thank you soooo much for reading this:twilightsmile:

10926503
You're welcome. :twilightblush:

O h.

I've commented on this many times, but I still have not fucking read this, wtf

Edit:
I have now read it, and-

7/10
Might clop again

10940980
Just stop procrastinating yourself from reading dammit:rainbowlaugh:

*WARNING:* This story features a topic of a polyamorous relationship so this story is not for people who has high moral grounds or who is a hater just because.

Well, I guess any excuse is good to write (you) fucking two sexy girls (also, sporty tomboys are for lewds and no one can convince me otherwise).

11178496
any excuse for me to write :derpytongue2:

Reasons to add this to read later? Well the cover has pretty girls in striped stockings... all i needed to get caught.

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