A guy meets the merchant as his OC and gets displaced to equistria way before Nightmare Moon later starts a cult and then gets sealed yeah i know pretty cliched for a displaced story.After Nightmare Moon incident he gets free and hijincks happen
This is my fist story so feel free to point out errors and mistakes
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Yeah. We all know the damn drill by now with a Displaced story. One of these days, I'm hoping someone will be original with how it happens.
But I'm not holding my breath.
Ill give it a shot.
Prob get to it day after tomorrow.
The Monk
“Puberty was a curse for those inflicted with it, and boundless amusement for others who survived the process.” -Scarheart
10166123
Where have you been looking and what sort of originality do you want when it comes to the displaced?
10166123
Along with the terrible grammar that pervades this genre.
Cool story can't wait to see more. Till next time peace.
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Displaced can be made original and interesting but too many times, authors use some unnecessary cliches
Example is here in description
From all the cliches that are in the displaced story, this is one I hate the most
It's easy, lazy way to time-skip, leaving main characters with nothing and pointlessly doing something in the past
General example
Displaced is in the past of Equestria, builds kingdom, he is sealed, kingdom crumbles, then he" wakes up" and then something, etc
Especially when at the beginning of the story he and readers want revenge on alicorns but eventually nothing happens with that, and the author tries to throw every explanation there is, why there won't be revenge, why alicorns have to be alive and why he will let them control sun and moon, etc
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That is true, however as you said, there is original ways of the Displaced if you look around a bit. Just don't sort by 'Newest' as the newest displaced stories are most likely to follow the whole "get stoned, time skip ahead, suddenly main character is op and is a master at their powers, skipping ALOT of character growth, thus cheating the reader out of getting a reason why they should get attached or be interested in the main character" bit.
MMMOOOOORRRRRRRAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
So much grammar and misspellings. But i get the gist of it and like it
No offense but what is with the apostrophes Why are they spaced like that?
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It has all the hallmarks of Translation, so it wouldn’t surprise with if the Author is not a native English Speaker.