Blazing fury is a normal pegasus. But there's a reason he has fury in his name. And why are his eyes blank, Why doesn't he talk about his past, where does he leave to every day? These are the questions his friend Luna has been asking.
"In this life we are either kings or pawns, emperors or fools." - Napoleon Bonaparte
Blazing fury is a normal pegasus. But there's a reason he has fury in his name. And why are his eyes blank, Why doesn't he talk about his past, where does he leave to every day? These are the questions his friend Luna has been asking.
Ouch. So many mistakes and bad grammar.
PLEASE get an editor.
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I know it's because this was just for fun and kinda rushed
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Never rush a story.
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You can try using Grammarly for grammar problems
I use this my self and it's not bad
Sup friend
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Nothing. You?
Browsing and found u. I’ll be watching
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I really appreciate that man
No problem
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I have edited it just a little. Nothing to fancy so don't get onto me about mistakes. Thank you for your feed back
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No problrem.
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What you think about the small edits
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Good stuff.