And that’s another one! How do you guys think it is? Any criticism or tips? What do you think of the (admittedly not too fleshed out [yet]) characters?
“I don’t know. It looked like a baby pucked all over a tiny ass horse,” answered Hugo.
What does that mean?
“What’s the problem? You brought a fucking knive when we were going to a fight! We all insisted to not use knives,” said Julio with a frown in his face.
Does the fight even matter any more?
“And? I didn’t bring a knive, I brought a multipurpose tool ,” said Hugo with confidence.
Ok, I actually laughed at that part.
Dear Princess Celestia,
Recently, an unknown creature has attacked Yellow Drive, an earth pony and one of the residents of Ponyville, in a area near the Everfree Forest were there has never been documented an attack before. The creature was accompanied by others of the same species, and it is said to be bipedal, strong legs and arms, and a height towering over the likes of minotaurs. I request that you send a platoon of royal soldiers to Ponyville to keep guard. This is a serious matter since somepony was badly hurt, and there could be more cases.
Your royal student friend, Princess Twilight Sparkle.
P.S. Yellow Drive went to the forest because he heard voices calling for help, so they might be intelligent, which makes them more dangerous!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dvf6gz58xnI
And that’s another one! How do you guys think it is? Any criticism or tips? What do you think of the (admittedly not too fleshed out [yet]) characters?
What does that mean?
Does the fight even matter any more?
Ok, I actually laughed at that part.
Did she start the letter over?