Just a simple guy who likes making stories.
Page generated in 0.138 seconds
Total duration
808 users online
500,360 hits today, 2,020,241 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Epic! I loved every single bit! Good job!
I support this, and I’ll help as much as possible
10280802
10280788
Thanks, ways to possibly help right now is in the Author's Note, by all means, give it a look.
Also, ideas for future chapters would be welcomed too.
Just wondering if you could get a flutter shy image out so it is possible to get a better visual image of what she looks like here.
10280936
Maybe, but all I've found so far is half-naked pictures of her.
So far I like the story pls keep update it
I like the story so far keep it up
10281006
10280989
Thanks, if you know anyone else who'd might enjoy this, feel free to tell them.
If you're gonna copy Konosuba, you could at least try and be a bit discreet about it.
10281188
I didn't completely copy Konosuba, cause in Konosuba, Kazuma gets the upper hand on Aqua, while Chris was just playing by Exsistance's control over Fate, also Kazuma didn't get a demon cat or get to keep his smartphone when he was reborn.
10281194
Well, you didn't completely copy, but i'm just saying the similarities are a little too apparent, nothing wrong with taking an idea, but try to differentiate your story a bit more.
10281198
I am, unlike in Konosuba, Chris's allies aren't completely useless or impractical, just a need some strategy to be most effective.
Also, Chris doesn't get a healer that can bring back the dead, so he has to be extra careful.
10281202
That's a good start, i'll look forward to seeing what you do.
I wonder why ppl dislike your story tho..
Did you know that the chapter time is misspelled? I'm pretty sure laugh isn't supposed to be spelled luagh.
Just saw that and thought you should know.
Seems like a good story concept, but I haven't read it yet. Though I'm about to now.
The whole summary made me go oof to the poor guy. He makes Kazuma, the Re: Zero MC and the Smartphone Hero MC seem like they won the lottery.
Well this is an interesting read so far *sips tea* i do hope it continues
10281422
Maybe cause they either don't like HiE, AU, or Anthro stories.
Or they don't like that I'm treating the movie as canon
10281640
10281639
10281640
Thanks, if you know anyone else who'd might enjoy this, feel free to tell them.
10281795
I tend to be more of a passive observer. *Sips Tea* I make for a terrible guide.
10280936
I've given Fluttershy a picture
i thought he might bring up how twilight is acting like a mugger to him by demanding something from him. also abouse of power could follow now she is annoyed
10450320
*Abuse*
But I agree with you.
Ps nice to see a fellow fan.
Love the chapter very funny especially the alucard bit hahaha keep it up
So, a quest "claimed" or posted by Twilight? Or one where one or more Elements (the baubles, not the ponies) may be found at the end?
10452400
Nope, Twilight wanted to do it but never had time to, so that jeweled clip was just saying that the quest was being saved for her.
10452406
That is what I said. The quotation marks around claimed meant that she was "claiming" it without any real grounds to do so, thus, perfectly legal for anyone else to take it up.
10452408
Yeah but everyone thought they'd get in trouble if they took it, but this isn't the case as Twilight would be upset that she didn't get to do that quest, she wouldn't make a big fuse over it.
That is a line I haven’t seen anywhere.
Finally, a proper Isekai without cringy cliches.
That’s very creative and gave us a good laugh.
You forgot to correct that part.
10450320
You are right, but oh well. The character stays in character when he is being annoyed.
I like the creativity of the author in the story and how it plays. Humiliated twice Twilight by unique methods that played well at the end of the chapter without getting lost in the comedy or the progress of the story, bullfrogen eyes and explosives were a unique way of telling Fuck off in a nice and stinky way...
It’s a helluva spicey. Lil miss jay was the author who draws that Tempest Shadow.
10452443
Chris is still coping with his situations? He went Alucard without the violence that entails that name. Must be normal when the world changes.
Yes me like lol
10281766
Probably because they think it'll turn into one of those anime tropes where a majority of the fics (displaced) where they become a simp.
Is this fic Perma-dead or on hiatus?
More luck please 😸