• Published 28th Aug 2021
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I am a cloudbender [Pegasus] - Flash point



Reincarnated as a small cyan pegasus with a mane of two tones of blue, the darkest being the base with a fringe of a much lighter tone, his appearance gave his name. Storm Flash. Now Follow his adventure... if you want clear!~

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20.- Uh?

The party continues normally, except that now everything escalates a step further than normal as there are 2 individuals trying to become the life of the party, which prompted Pinkie Pie to hold many competitions in which everyone could join if they wished, although it was much more fun to observe how in each of them, one of the girls guided the other in small pranks or traps.

At some point someone put alcohol in the punch while everyone was enjoying Rainbow, Gilda and Pinkie's antics, by that time it was already around 10 or 11, so I left the party with a bit of a migraine, no. I'm good with alcohol even though I have a fast metabolism... 'I think I'm misinterpreting something, ugh I don't want to reason now'.

With a little push of my hind legs I was already flying at a moderately high speed, but I easily found my way home especially to the fluffy and soft mattress of my bed.

Sleep hit hard because when I opened my eyes it was already morning, I hurriedly flew to the kitchen for an apple to wake up- “Uh!?”

In "my" kitchen I found an unexpected visitor, well rather two when I saw the other one leave my kitchen, a very grumpy Rainbow jogged gently trying not to bring more pain to her grumpy little brain.

"WHERE DO YOU HAVE YOUR COFFEE??!!" Rainbow shouted urgently as large dark circles could be seen beneath her large tired eyes that looked at me in an irritating manner.

"I'm not going to question, but I don't drink coffee so I don't have it in my pantries and I only offer water to visitors" The last comment was to Gilda that she seemed to want to argue about some issue and apparently I got it right.

"Uuugh, everything wrong, WRONG, you are crazy, coffee is life, it's energy, it is the SUN of my life that makes me so incredible, you are blind and heretic of a law of life for every adult, only the colts don't drink coffee, that's why you only have that garbage f-flavored drink-" I didn't let her finish, I just threw her out of my house with my wings, we will get along fine but don't talk bad to me about grapes in "mah" house.

"Wasn't that a little rough for a pony?" Gilda commented from her place on the couch while she drank some hot drink.

"My house, mah rules, one of them, don't speak ill of my taste in grapes and changing the subject, are you drinking coffee?" I raise an eyebrow as I ignore the sounds of Rainbow complaining outside the door. ("**** grumpy grape maniac")

"Aha, I bring what I need in my bag and caffeine is one of those things" Gilda pointed to a brown bag with rock band labels hanging on the wall.

"...I don't have time to discuss why you didn't share, you're not a pony, I don't expect you to share even your soul just for friendship" I passed by Gilda as I prepared everything with speed and efficiency.

"She didn't ask, anyway, the score had not been completely even, and now we are"

"HEY!!! TRAITOR I KNEW IT WAS COFFEE!" Rainbow came in with some problems, her scream was affected because the bag in her mouth.

"And how delicious it is" *surp* Rainbow's left eye twitched, she walked past her and went straight to me who only watched with curiosity while I drank my morning nutritional smoothie and prepared my forge.

"My apology for inviting us without telling you, but it was a bit dangerous to fly to my house last night because of the strong winds that were blowing from the Everfree." Rainbow didn't look me in the eye as she excused herself to sleep at my house... as she had been doing more and more often.

She watched me for a few seconds in silence to see if she would say anything else since it has been increasingly difficult to get time alone for myself without feeling her or having her close to her.

"Are you going to take it or not!" Rainbow yelled in annoyance as she dropped the gift on the table showing an exquisite triple layer grape flavored cake with thin flower shaped grape slices on top.

"Stay as long as you want." I ignored the reddish fur on Rainbow's face in favor of the cake that totally caught my attention, a calculation quickly crossing my mind about how much more exercise I would have to do to compensate for what I'll do next... for what I'm doing now.

"By the next I will have coffee in the cupboard" Out of my vision I didn't see Rainbow's big smile as well as Gilda's amused smile who watched everything in silence while she took small sips of her coffee.

I spent a little more time with both girls since I had to finish my cake that Rainbow brought me and aside out of politeness since they were just about to have breakfast.

A/N: He didn't have that intention at all 3min ago.

The girls told me everything that happened after I left, about how some things escalated when only adults were left or how Ditzy made out with Dr. Whooves after she got drunk enough from the alcohol that could even found in cupcakes.

"Too bad you left early Flash, are you afraid of alcohol?" Gilda nudged my shoulder with her wing playfully, Rainbow became fully alert to her interest as she perked her ears.

"It's not a secret, just no one has asked me, I just don't like it, other than I've never had it before" I said absentmindedly as enjoyed the taste of another spoonful of the cake.

Rainbow showed a playful smile on her face as several ideas came up on her idea of alcohol + Flash.

Once I finished my cake and they had their breakfast, I retired to carry the wild clouds that came out of Everfree.

"Well, take care of yourselves and don't destroy my house, I'll go do my duties." I said goodbye to them at the entrance of my house, with a small impulse I was already several meters away from the ground.

The girls said goodbye to me with a greeting and stayed chatting happily for a while longer at my house, it's good that everything has gone well since the Party, Gilda was able to find her way in this small town.


The whole morning I spent controlling the clouds that came out of the Everfree so everyone could see me flying along the edge of the Everfree forest while I had a red apple in my mouth, the clouds dissipated in a colorful explosion like all the other mornings together with an increase in the humidity of the environment and a fresh morning breeze that brightened the day of several ponies that walked the streets of the town on their way to work or those who simply enjoyed the day.

I finished my routine quickly, since I had a promise to keep to go to the Boutique Carusel and my day had started slower than normal, apart from the fact that there is still that letter.


"Stretch your neck dear, I don't want to hurt you with my needles" An elated and cheerful Rarity commented as she controlled more than a dozen tools throughout the room.

I raised an eyebrow at her comment because for a while now I've only seen a whole bunch of needles flying at a good speed that maintain my measurements while others sew my suit.

Rarity continued walking around the place while drawing several designs in her notebook and at the same time making others real, most of them being for mares. She made dresses at the same time as doing more than five multitasking tasks. I can't help but admire such skill.

"I see that you already know what dress the other girls will wear." Looking at the dresses, I can easily guess which one each one belonged to, they almost shout out the names of who they belong to.

"Hn! Oh, they're just ideas, I still have to find out if they want to modify them, remember that they are for the Grand Gala Galope, a mega super event where we can find a real prince and..." Rarity got lost in her fantasy and that was demonstrated when all the tools were left floating in place.

"Ba! But for now your outfit for the GGG is ready, now tell me honey, what would you like me to change?" Rarity looked expectantly at Flash, now she only had her notebook to write down any comments.

Flash was surprised when he saw himself in the mirror with his suit completely sewn and the quality of the design totally captured his stallion, it was easy to see how his suit highlighted his muscles and wings, the accessories in the shape of a storm cloud were a plus for Flash along with the pin in the shape of his cutie mark on his sleeves, while he looked satisfied, Rarity only nodded proudly as she heard the thoughts of Flash who spoke out loud without meaning to.

"Name the price and I will pay it without hesitation, for my part I would only wear a tie and a gray beret hat, I can't wait now to surprise my mom" A sweet smile filled Flash's face at the thought of seeing his mother and above all by surprising her.

Rarity was momentarily in a trance, but she soon regained her composure.

"It was nothing honey and it's a gift so just don't metnion it, well just don't reject me when I invite you to hang out" Rarity shook her hoof while trying to hide her smile with her notebook.

"Could you please help me put the suit away"

"No doubt! There is a zipper that will help you take it off or put it on easily, I know how complicated it is sometimes to use just your hooves"

... .. .

The hours passed and Rarity managed to design more styles of clothing for pegasus, especially a total branch of unisex sports clothing, very useful for those mares who like to look good even when exercising, good designs for their future.

Flash retired after meeting Sweetie Belle who is a very enthusiastic filly trying to follow her sister's example when she followed her like a duckling throughout the Boutique giving her the materials she used or congratulating her on the new dresses designed, Flash couldn't avoid thinking about another similar but more sporty duo.

After retiring, he tried to find something to do so he went around Ponyville to see if there was anything he could help with related to the weather, but with Rainbow having the same day of duty, he hardly found anything, so he decided to stop to Think for a moment about how to perform another magical phenomenon as Twilight calls her magic.

Tranquility surrounded Flash without being disturbed by his surroundings, some ponies wanted to greet him, but seeing him so focused they let him be, but a brave little filly had other ideas.

"!!!" Flash's golden eyes widened when he saw Scootaloo very comfortable on his chest.

"I feel very comfortable and safe here, what are you thinking Flash?"

"That's good to hear, and I'm thinking about how to make the air cold or hot" Flash patted Scootaloo.

"Can't you just blow and cool the air? I cooled the clover soup like that Fuuh~~. My aunt loves burning food. I've burned my tongue like three times." Flash felt like he wanted to hit his head against something hard at that moment., the idea wasn't revolutionary but its simple concept made it very easy to ignore when his mind thinks about magic.

"Fuu~" Flash let out a small breath on Scotts who just closed his eyes enjoying the breeze.

"It worked! And your breath smells like grapes!" Scootaloo fanaticism came back strong in her when he jumped with excitement and started blowing hard trying to blow icy air on Flash, but she only managed to spit out get dizzy from blowing so much.

"Nice try, but you still have a long way to go" Flash had to silence Scootaloo with his hoof to avoid being completely bathed in saliva.

"Awn... But does that mean that in the future I'll be able to freeze some annoying ponies? What else can you freeze? You can also blow hot air... well, even I can do that."

The two ended up spending the rest of the time together talking about how Flash could or should use his powers to punish bad colts, but Flash just laughed and helped flesh out Scootaloo's fantasy, spending the time like that. , until Scotts ended up asleep on Flash's chest.

“Well, I guess it's a good time to read that letter.” Once I made sure that Scotts was comfortable, I managed to get the letter out of my forge. It was a little uncomfortable to use only one wing, but not impossible, although it bothered me to have to use my main feathers. for this.

But it bothers me more to have to open the letter sealed with a wax seal, for small things like this I miss my hands or I wish I had telekinesis or magic as the unicorns call it.


|={To: Flash Storm – The Bringer of Will}=|
For my dear pony, I hope you are well when you receive the letter, the point of sending this is to reaffirm your necessary presence in the Grand Gallop Gala that I request that you participate as Celestia and not an order as Princess.

I hope you have already lost those bad thoughts about not coming with the other girls to the Gran Galope Gala, I understand that your mother Clear Day will participate like previous years and this time I had the opportunity to speak with her during a meeting with the Climatic Team from Canterlot, she is a sweet pony, very dedicated to her work, she talked to me a lot about you and your past, which only increases my desire to talk to you, my little pony.

My sweet sister also seems to have a high interest in talking to you and no matter how much I question her, she does not tell me the cause of her interest in you, even when I have bribed her with five-tier cakes, she will not tell me anything, this makes me more intrigued.

As for your special case as a Deviant, you don't have to worry about a call of duty, Twilight has been giving me reports on your situation since the elements were discovered, so I'm very happy to see that had normal life as other ponies, I hope nothing change that.


~ By: Celestia ~


Author's Note:

Abandoned history.
-Milestones to achieve by the OC:
//Ability to fully predict Everfree's weather
//Overcome a second sound barrier.
//Affect the weather with only emotions
//Tune with the weather, know if a place needs rain or hot seasons, etc.
//*Optional, Make him an Alicorn with control over the world's weather, dedicate himself to helping the small factions without Pegasus to control the weather, as something cliché I was inclined not to do.
Defects:
OC too robot, monotonous like almost everything.
Sorry for explaining some things too much, but that's who I am, I enjoy investigating the reasons for things and I tend to explain them... like now.
I had several ideas for this story, but they are all loose ideas with nothing to tie them together so I never focused on any of them or gave them a real or general purpose.
Being your best version, a small wish of mine that I imposed in writing, that's what this story was.
Many ideas come to me over time but I don't put them into action.
So many things I want to do, but without energy and time to do it, that caused the decline of publishing more chapters mainly.

Comments ( 14 )

First and last!

-Happy Christmast and new year

Hey. It's alright Flash. I still enjoy your story, even if it's just thoughts you're implementing, it's a good work that I wanna keep reading.

11751977
Thanks you for enjoying my little tale.😊


But right now I'm more interested right now in MAGIC! or more specifically write the story of someone who reincarnates as a unicorn, Wiz Bell
Main Magic: Flash and Transmutation
Occupation: Writer and hobby creating trinkets (toys)
Obviously living in Ponyville because it's easy to keep track of all the places.

Plot: I don't know, think about adding a human as an extra OC to add some variety while the MC develops his combat magic, reason, simple martial arts fanaticism.

Tags: Anthro

How would I develop the idea? It would be good to extend his childhood, especially with the theme of Celestia's magic school, and write around that.

"Uuugh, everything wrong, WRONG, you are crazy, coffee is life, it's energy, it is the SUN of my life that makes me so incredible, you are blind and heretic of a law of life for every adult, only the colts don't drink coffee, that's why you only have that garbage f-flavored drink-" I didn't let her finish, I just threw her out of my house with my wings, we will get along fine but don't talk bad to me about grapes in "mah" house.

You know you're an addict when... :ajbemused:

"By the next I will have coffee in the cupboard" Out of my vision I didn't see Rainbow's big smile as well as Gilda's amused smile who watched everything in silence while she took small sips of her coffee.

She;ll keep it in stock; she just ain't gonna drink it.

"Stretch your neck dear, I don't want to hurt you with my needles" An elated and cheerful Rarity commented as she controlled more than a dozen tools throughout the room.

As long as Rarity hasn't taken an interest in acupuncture....

11751975
And a Mary Christmas to you too. Perhaps I bit early, but this little update is a lovely surprise.

While I would love to see you finished this story, I have seen good stories turned horribly sour by a forced finish. So whatever hiatus speed suits you, suits me too.

Have a good new year if I don't speak to before then. I look forward to seeing how Wiz Bell will develop.

Who the heck is Scotts?

That's okay. I like your story. And this new chapter is great.

I'm looking forward to seeing Flash training Scootaloo. I want to see how great she'll be with him as her training coach. Along with seeing more of your upcoming chapters, remember:

Keep trying. Keep believing. Be happy. Don't be discouraged. Things will work out.

Here's a song that will make you do whatever it takes. Enjoy!

https://youtu.be/HcNcOnIkQQU?si=M0IFEhui1wuWOMK8

An awesome chapter! Glad to see this update again. Hope to see more of your works soon. And Merry Christmas!

If the story is abandoned as you say it is, then mark it as cancelled. It being on hiatus just gives false hope that it will return.

Well damn, another story down into the bins of history. I was enjoying this story and it sucks that you’ve abandoned it but Tis life. I wish you luck in your future endeavors whatever they may be.

Aww man. I at least wanted to see how he can completely and utterly screw with discord just by saying 'buck off'

This is such a good story, why’d you cancel it? I, for one, would love to have some more, please.

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