this aint a bad story out the gate. Im guessing that is got ratio'ed because of anon and second person thing along with the strange Daybreaker/Celestia situation.
Its an interesting concept and the story so far has been good. The swap with celestia proper and day breaker is nice to see. I'll keep reading. Thank you for the upload.
11187698 It seems that I've already found an editor- but you can still get in touch with me to give a lookover on chapters. It's always nice to have a second opinion on the direction of the story.
this aint a bad story out the gate. Im guessing that is got ratio'ed because of anon and second person thing along with the strange Daybreaker/Celestia situation.
Its an interesting concept and the story so far has been good.
The swap with celestia proper and day breaker is nice to see.
I'll keep reading.
Thank you for the upload.
Great story man. Keep it up!
Very interesting.
This is pretty good.
I'm liking where this story is going, interesting concept!
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Ohh quite lovely so far! I enjoy Daybreakers antics and Anonymous' as well.
I am excited for more!
Given the subject matter and Anon's mental state, I don't think the Comedy tag is appropriate.
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The fic: imminent rape
The commentors: haha, this is such a funny family guy moment!
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It seems that I've already found an editor- but you can still get in touch with me to give a lookover on chapters. It's always nice to have a second opinion on the direction of the story.
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Just don't get raped it isn't that hard
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It's proper dark comedy. You set up a dire situation then make light of it via comedic moments.
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Don't ever join the military then, you couldn't stand our style of dark humor.