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Undead Equestrian Writer


But would I be a good Messiah with my low self-esteem? If I don't believe in myself would that be blasphemy? - Bloodhound Gang; Hell Yeah

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Deep in the heart of the Everfree Forest, close to the Castle of the Two Sisters, a tomb sits in secluded silence, buried under the surface. Inside is a world that is alien to the ponies of Equestria, with technology so foreign and strange.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 22 )

That was awesome can't wait 4 more thank u

Only problem I see here is

"A.L.I.S Command Hub?" Twilight spoke softly as she closed the scroll"

Should be Central Hub, not sure why else she would be saying Command Hub.

I cant wait to see where you'll take this from here, you have my interest.

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Oops, that's what I get for writing while not paying attention

Interesting I think I will follow

I've been trying to find stories luke this. Where a ancient but superior advance civilization long forgotten and died out

Please keep this going

This story is amazing please continue

Thanks for the update

Hmmm, not a photo ID it seems (or no EQG/Sunset this AU) ...

Nice, looking forward to this.

First contact with the ponies, gonna be an exciting time for both.

Warning incoming techno magic babble incoming. Bring lots of pens and notebooks... PS pills for the soon to come headaches....

Time for the start of interaction, can't wait.

What does A.L.I.S. stand for?

Ok. Eso es ser una perra, Twilight.

This is getting good when the next chapter comes out:twilightsmile:

This is starting out like the story, where Twilight and a companion, explored an ancient Diamond Dog underground city. I love stories of exploring ancient sites.

DAMN !!!! HAL IS STILL FUNCTIONAL !!!!

There's too much wrong with Twilights', and Fluttershys' analysis of what they were exploring. They were both too spot-on with their conclusions. They were giving "ANSWERS", to what should have been "GUESSES". They will no doubt, be dealing with what appears to be a sentient A.I.. I hope the exploration will have a "SATISFACTORY" conclusion.

I find it odd that "ALICE", has a "MALE" persona.

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