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Gotta say I'm a sucker for Rarijack. And this fits the ticket. Well written with some nice ideas and a lot of content. Plus you aren't trying to rush the ship which is a big flaw most fics have. That my friend is a huge accomplishment.
Loving this Merc. Glad you asked me to read it because dangit I'm enjoying it. The names confuse me for a few seconds the first time I read them in every chapter though, but i've gotten used to it.
Should be "refused to budge." Unless there's something else about that bag you aren't telling us...
And... is this REALLY a RariJack shipfic? I'm only asking because my headcanon demands SoarinJack. This story is still going well in either case.
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You've got, like, eagle eyes, man. Or maybe I'm just a terrible editor. Actually, it's both.
Though Lunapple is the one ship to rule them all.
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What do you mean by "both"? Like, both a RariJack AND a SoarinJack shipfic, or...?
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No, I meant both as in you caught an error I hadn't seen, and I'm a bad editor. Just making a joke, mate.
1421394 Confirmation to what I've suspected from the start: love between my two favorite ponies. Bravo mon bonhomme. Bravo.
Alright, so yeah. I'm quite enjoying this story. I was a bit cynical at first, but I've come to like it.
Of the characters so far I find Dash and Applejack the most likable. You've done a good job making AJ a bit different, but still herself and interesting for it. Plus AJ's casual heroics in saving Rarity and reassuring her was pretty great. I like Dash as the Dude/bro type. I find the banter between the two of them amusing. But then I suppose they were my favorite characters from the show.
One thing I've been surprised by is how much the plot actually interests me.
To be honest I only started reading this story because I promised to give all humanised a fair chance after writing my own, and in this case I was pleasantly surprised. Cool story bro. Keep up the good work.
Oh, and I like the way your approaching this Rarijack, with Rarity mistakenly thinking Applejack has interest in her. I'm guessing that getting saved like that will endear Jack to Rares a fair bit. It'll be interesting to see how you handle this.
I like that you've actually made Rainbow Dash likable to me (she's my least favorite pony of all) without changing her too much, and I especially like what you did with Iron Will in this chapter; unfortunately, way too many people seem to think he was a villain after PYHD.
1479633 Very much so
1485309 And this, too.
only humanized fic ive ever liked, and i really do like it! cant wait to see more.
How is this not popular? Like seriously, this is a really good fic
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I'm guessing either because it's humanized, or because I didn't write a 2nd person clop scene by chapter two.
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It's a pity though, there are a small handful of humanized fics that are pretty good
Anyways, keep up the good work :D
(Is that an appropriate complement >.>?)
Phew. Finally caught up... but... what else is there to say besides...
I love this story! Please write MOAR!
Please! I'm begging you!
I won't survive without MOAR CHAPTERS!
I love you
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Love you too, guy.
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I desire more than your love!
I desire your Chapter Updates!
I haven't slept in DAYS!
I love this Iron Will. That he also teaches those philosophical courses is great
Yeah, enjoying this story so far though.
I see a lot of comments about which ship-fics are the best but in reality they are all great but...... twiluna is my personal favorite
I have to say, I'm taken aback by how good this story is so far. To find a humanized story that goes far beyond 'ponies that look like humans' is a welcome and refreshing find. The description has had me interested for a while, but I usually avoid M6 shipping like the plague. Finally decided to give this a try anyways, and I am not disappointed.
Nicely done
... Day made. I am really enjoying this story.
This story, in every conceivable way, has blown my expectations away.
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I agree. I applaud you for not selling out and working towards popularity without taking the easy road.
So they have cell phones, but internal combustion engines are cutting edge technology? What kind of fucked up reality is this based on? My Little Pony or something?
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Discor...hmm ok I get it now.
The description leading up to Iron Will.
My reaction: Oh god dammit not him, not *Reads the name* Iron Will. *Reads on* Okay...I like this Iron Will most definitely!