Man, what a great way to open a story. I absolutely loved the first and second chapter, and I'm probably going to reread them before I start on the third and fourth. I'm not sure why, but I feel this story is different than any others I've read from you so far, and I am absolutely loving it!
Man, I love this story so much! It just feels so different, so personal and connected than anything else I’ve read from you, and I loved every single second if it. I am an absolute hopeless romantic, so the fact that we see the sex scenes between two ponies who are filled with love and joy just by being around each other is so amazing. Leech is just perfect and witty and truly cares, while Light just has a heart of gold and a wonderful sense of love, and even if the two of them make mistakes with each other, just how they’re written so far, you can tell that this relationship will be solid and strong.
It’s not even finished yet, and I’m already so excited. I think I can confidently say this is one of the better stories I am reading on the site, and defintely my favorite one from you, Leech. Keep up the good work!!
Man, what a great way to open a story. I absolutely loved the first and second chapter, and I'm probably going to reread them before I start on the third and fourth. I'm not sure why, but I feel this story is different than any others I've read from you so far, and I am absolutely loving it!
Plus it's always nice to see your OC!
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One knows they picked a winner when she says "Bitch, can't ask him with asking me too."
Been reading your stories for a while, love how you do different things. I love how the story is so wholesome and yet dirty at the same time lol
Man, I love this story so much! It just feels so different, so personal and connected than anything else I’ve read from you, and I loved every single second if it. I am an absolute hopeless romantic, so the fact that we see the sex scenes between two ponies who are filled with love and joy just by being around each other is so amazing. Leech is just perfect and witty and truly cares, while Light just has a heart of gold and a wonderful sense of love, and even if the two of them make mistakes with each other, just how they’re written so far, you can tell that this relationship will be solid and strong.
It’s not even finished yet, and I’m already so excited. I think I can confidently say this is one of the better stories I am reading on the site, and defintely my favorite one from you, Leech. Keep up the good work!!
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Glad someone said it, as a smut writer who also writes cheating themes...definitely should put a tag for infidelity my friend. Just in case!
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It'll make sense...
Aww shit man, happy endings always make me cry.
That's a happily ever after if I ever saw one
It only makes sense. They were supposed to run the bakery in tandem. There's only so much "sleeping alone at home" one can reasonably do....