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Apple Bloom bravely ventures to rescue Smarty Pants the Grand from his castle prison.
Cover Image by: http://ikillyou121.deviantart.com/
Partially Inspired by this image: http://derpibooru.org/111668?scope=scpe4141fa08f6e4fa736a8c924cf0f23116bc874c90
Also, thanks to Garbo802 for the help :)
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is it a bad thing if I imagined every part of this fic as if it were an actual episode?
Anyhow, great fic. thumb up.
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Not at all. I'm actually sort of trying to go for a more "episodic" feel with my stories so I'm actually happy to hear you say that
Awesome! I love Big Mac's part... you always add the best smile-inducing twists at the end.
Is this what the class is going to read for your assignment? And you're doing very well with the episodic feel- it's quite like what I'd expect to see from the show, and the pacing is good and high-energy.
Looks like the uploader ate some of your formatting- places where you wanted italics in the early paragraphs have the carets - "< i >" and such. And with the ribbon and the dragon, I think your spellchecker subbed 'reign' for 'rein'
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Yeah sorry about that. I just submitted it to DA and their italics are <i></i> instead of
I'll fix that, thanks for alerting me and thanks for the fave
Nothin' to apologize for- I parse pretty well for being analog. I just wanted to help you avoid the grammar Nazis. You know their motto: "Ve haff vays of makink ju talk... CORRECTLY."
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Oh yes, I know all about them.
Heil Grammar!
*stands up out of his wheelchair*
"Mein Editor... I can VALK!"
Ten Poni-points to anyone who can spot that reference!!
Also wanted to mention that I got the idea for hoofball from the first chapter of "Clop It!" by PrettyMonster. Making sure credit is given where it's due.
NEEDS MORE ME
That said, nice little fic.
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Thanks
Nice story, but needs editing. There are several sentence fragments and misspellings.
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Why would it need you? (jk)
There were?
Well if that's true, I guess I wasn't paying enough attention when i preread this thing.
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No remember, this is not the version you proof-read so any mistake is my fault. The big reason I gave you credit was because you read through it and gave me the advice on how Apple Bloom, as a ninja, wouldn't be afraid so I did tweak it a bit. Sorry about that man
This was delightful. I once planned on writing a story similar to this one, about some fillies and colts playing imaginary adventures in an imaginary far land, but I scrapped it because I couldn't find the right way to do it. You did it
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Also, thank you for featuring it on your profile ("Under Hidden Gems"). Yeah, sort of profile-stalked you, sorry.
1756683 Don't worry, I profile-stalk people all the time
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Maybe I shouldn't have said that
Haha, Fluffer-Nutters.
I liked it. I thought it was playful and imaginative.
Hmmm not bad [ it would be funny if Edge taught her]