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A lonely DJ and a depressed musician meet in an unfortunte way. Can Vinyl help this poor soul or will his life forever be singing the blues. Join Steady Beat and Vinyl on a musical journey that will bring two musicians closer than they thought possible.
Finally I though up a good story for Vinyl, hope this comes out well!
Vinyl X O.C.
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I do not own any music featured in this fic. All credit goes to the people who made it.
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Even though the idea of tragedy to love is a slightly outdated concept for stories, I feel if done correctly it could still be a amazing story. I will be happy to read on in future chapters to see how this plays out!
not bad like it so far
M04RP10X! Translation: I'm intrigued and would like to see more in the near future.
Oh my god...instantly hate Thunderlane and instantly interested in this story, I thought he would kill him like Jeff the killer but sadly no
It is interesting so far and you have a nice oc pony and I will be wanting to learn about him more.
Pretty good story! I think it'd help if you took it a TAD slower, maybe smoothed things out a bit- reads kinda choppy.
Certainly good enough for a +1 and a fav
Looking forward to more, pretty good.
Not bad! Only things that stood out.
You spelled course as 'corse'
“Of corse I won’t say a word....
Except for my sister of corse.”
Look forward to more =)
Another great chapter. This story really seems to be coming along nicely. personally I would've prefered some drama like his ex comes back, telling him that she is sorry and makes him conflicted on who to choose. It's your story and I like it your way so keep it up.
1860610 Oh don't worry something like that will happen in the future
Wooooooo beat deservers special vodka excellent chapter comrade
" like that rathe than in black"
forgot an 'R"
Seems to be moving a bit fast, with a bit of blocky text-moments....but pretty good.
Pretty good! ^_^
"G-got it.” Vinyl said in a scarred tone."
'Scared' Methinks =) Could use a tad smoothing out, but I like it!
The story so far is pretty good. There are some pretty bad grammatical errors in there though. Apostrophes need to be placed correctly. Apostrophes show ownership in nouns, not a plural noun. Sorry if I sound like a grammar nazi but you just really need to watch out for those grammar errors that are dragging this excellent story down.
Oh, and why would you make Octavia lesbian...
Whyyyyy!!!!!?!?
1870546 Relax I have a plan for Octavia
Another special rainbow vodka for beat congratulations comrade
1870546
Hooves And Dials
Allegrezza
In an Instant
Accidental Harmony
The Last Minute
Élégie, Op. 24
Learning to Play the Lyra
The Snow on Her Cheek
Moonlight Sonata
An Island, Two Mares and a Bottle of Rum
Vinyl and Octavia: University Days
Changes
My Roommate is a Vampire
Two's Company, Three's a Crowd
Mixing Relationships
My Roommate is a Lycan
Possible because it's general fan consensus?
Man, this great, despite everything ranging from spelling errors to that one moment when you spelt Gear instead of Beat, I couldn't stop laughing...and speaking of which...where's dat at and it almost seems like all your stories are the same...just saying, the main mare is alone with her friend and she confesses, yeah, that's happened about 3 times now...
1875237 Sorry when you're writing multiple stories at once I sometimes get the characters mixed up.
For my writing style I've noticed this and will try and mix it up in the future.
1875507
It's alright, mate...I like your style
Now I remember where I heard that song, it was in the [PROTOTYPE2] live action trailer....hahaha
1883772 True, but I just put it in because Johnny Cash is Awesome!
Fantastic story!!!! i cant wait to see more of it
awesome
Likes this story.
its you again, the one who did Crazy for Apples, Well once again you have written a story that I can sink my teeth into. Gonna be keeping my eye on you.
Looks to see who the author is
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Authors name looks familiar
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OH SHIT!
1918608 I aim to please and feel free to check out my other stories.
Just found this and did I catch a Danny Phantom reference there?
Also good stuff dude/dudette
lol Danny phantom reference
screech hmm sounds like it would be similar to my ballistic roar.
1945414 Wasn't thinking it when writing it. Just circumstantial.
What's a ballistic roar?
Since I didn't say it in previous chapters I'll say it now. Sonic Adventure 2 was better than one. (There I said, what you gonna do?) I will say that Gamma was my favorite character to play out of all of them, and I loved his theme song even though there wasn't any singing like the others. Got a little teary when he died
1963121 Oh I agree, I loved Sonic Adventure 2.
Gamma's and Shadow's story's really moved me and were the first games I played on the Game cube.
"I found Celestia
Great fic, great fic, makes me feel bad about my own 
On the corner on first and Amistad
Where the west
Was but won
All alone, smoking her last cigarette
I said where you been?
She said ask anything"
1967363 Thank you
and you're fic is very entertaining!
Just from reading this... good writing. Cliche' to say the least, but the writing is sound and the story has some potential. I'll be sure to comment where I see fit, or desired.
And "whee" said Beat as his life suddenly turns into a roller-coaster.
This is great. I am in love with this fic... It is sad I must wait for the update, so know I wait with baited breath.
It's okay man
Glad to see you didn't give up on this fic I really like it
Could it be
Has he Review Train finally made it to this station? It is, let celebrate with a review:
I wonder what would happen if Velvet and Pinkie hugged each other, would they snap their spines or will the universe blow up?
That first song really made me laugh.
As for the second song, this is the second time I've seen this video and I still don't know what the song is about.
I see your pic and raise you with a gif.*end of review*
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It is great to see this story back again after so long, if Velvet is gonna be in more chapters I would like to see a pic of her.
Yes, FINALLY
And she's back.
here we go
Was the girl in the Pumble and Pip dance number singing Japonese.
2588901 Yes, it's called Bad Apple.
Again. A fantastic.
Again, I needed to read the entire last chapter (or most of) to remember what the hell was going on.
Nice job, a few small errors here and there but no big issues overall.
Looking forward to more.
Awesome as, brah
but seriously...
Got enough links there, mate?
2590032 Sorry since it was a talent show I had to out in quite a few things. it'll go back to like 2-3 songs a chapter.
Luna is best princess