The last thing Joseph could remember was the car crash. Now, he's lost in a small town with blurred memories of home, found by six colorful teenagers. Now, he is presented with a new chance to recreate his life, a life better than his reality.
Hopefully more is answered. Spike will be dealt with next chapter, don't worry. Also, Rarity's character will be dealt with next chapter (I'll make a smooth transition hopefully into her more canon character, as well as give an "explanation" to why she was so un-canon (aka. covering up my mistake without rewriting the whole story, lol >w<~)
"OH CAN IT YOU STUPID FRESHMEN!" Rarity wailed, almost throwing her chair over (if the chairs weren't bolted into the ground. Granted, people do crazy things sometimes. . .)
Rarity what are you doing?
"I'd be DAMNED if you moved to a new place and had to perform in front of your peers in the third day! Why, I bet you guys can't even act! You guys won't even get a damn part! UGH, the AUDACITY of some people!" Rarity sat back down politely in her seat, fixing her hair and giving me a small wink.
Rarity?
"GO JOSEPH! WOO! YOU'RE SO GOOD YOU COULD BE THE PRINCE!" Rarity screamed, standing up and applauding loudly.
...this man seems addled(I think that's the word you know when somethings not quite right) maybe his brain isn't responding correctly like after a stroke cause I gotta say, blowing off twilight and applejack is something only a fool or a slow individual (say that in french its offensive) would do, seriously sexy librarian and a well toned farm girl and you pick rarity? man U crazy...(I respect all opinions unless they're wrong...but I just dont have rarity held in high regard not even top 5)
2033845...I sense drama coming....a lot of drama, him getting kicked in the nuts with the force to knock a thousand apples out of a tree (ANY tree) and getting beat to death by books and book cases....unless spike gets to him first (whatever his name is in this story)
I'm not feeling a relationship with Joseph and rarity, Im a fan of him and AJ, but this drama can be cool, as long as you know how to pull it off keep em coming!!!
Chapter 5 is finished, it just needs to go through my editor.
My friend Peter just helped me a fix a FATAL error in the story (Chapter 3b, Joseph was referred to by his real last name instead of Hamilton.) Thanks Peter. If you guys find stuff too, then please tell me owo.
I'm on the hunt for a secondary editor. If anybody is interested, please come talk to me. My current editor seems to have dropped all contact with me, ignoring me for quite a while now (Our last contact was on Thursday. I've texted her every day since. She's seen the messages and chooses not to reply)
Message me if you'd be interested.
Also, just a question. This IS based on VN aspects. Many VNs are quite over-sexualized, with sex scenes being prevelant (or at least the ones I've looked at.). There isn't direct sex in the up and coming chapter (Chapter 6. I decided to write it, since my editor had been taking so long to get to 5. Neither are published), but there is. . . second base. Would you guys feel that this detracts from the overall believablity or integrity of the story? It makes sense, I believe, for the character and for the plot, and it will be used as a plot device in future chapters, I just want to see what you guys want.
Chapters will be published, eventually (Both 5 and 6 are complete.)
Stratege is helping me with editing (although he is not a dedicated editor), so the beginning chapters might get slight updates. It's nothing incredibly major that throws off the plot, though.
My old editor is pretty much done for, we had a talk yesterday and she's out. She'll still look at it but I wont' rely on her for anything anymore. So the position for an editor is still open.
Joseph, you are officially the biggest asshole I've ever read about ~~
If AJ looks like the one on the image, I'm not suprised he's got a crush on her. I'd fell to her too propably... Make them live long and happy and sh*t.
I will get chapters out. I will I will I will. I have three chapters waiting for you guys.
I just don't want to publish chapters that are not top quality. I also need to discuss ideas and things to make sure that you guys like the ideas. Yay. Sorry for the wait.
Chapter 4 edited and published!
Hopefully more is answered. Spike will be dealt with next chapter, don't worry. Also, Rarity's character will be dealt with next chapter (I'll make a smooth transition hopefully into her more canon character, as well as give an "explanation" to why she was so un-canon (aka. covering up my mistake without rewriting the whole story, lol >w<~)
Hope you all like it.
This. Just... this.
Pleeeease explain what in the holy hell is wrong with Rarity. That is all.
I shall in the next chapter :3.
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Man, FUCK HOME! Stay here and get all the bitchez
Rarity what are you doing?
Rarity?
Stahp!!!!
YES! MOAR!
...this man seems addled(I think that's the word you know when somethings not quite right) maybe his brain isn't responding correctly like after a stroke cause I gotta say, blowing off twilight and applejack is something only a fool or a slow individual (say that in french its offensive) would do, seriously sexy librarian and a well toned farm girl and you pick rarity? man U crazy...(I respect all opinions unless they're wrong...but I just dont have rarity held in high regard not even top 5)
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Yeah, he's intentionally incredibly clueless.
But he didn't really CHOOSE Rarity, Rarity chose him :3.
2033845...I sense drama coming....a lot of drama, him getting kicked in the nuts with the force to knock a thousand apples out of a tree (ANY tree) and getting beat to death by books and book cases....unless spike gets to him first (whatever his name is in this story)
He was in a coma the whole time?
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Why am I not surprised?
I'm not feeling a relationship with Joseph and rarity, Im a fan of him and AJ, but this drama can be cool, as long as you know how to pull it off keep em coming!!!
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Not to give any spoilers, but I still plan on making this story Joseph x Applejack.
Wink wink nudge nudge ;3.
Chapter 5 is finished, it just needs to go through my editor.
My friend Peter just helped me a fix a FATAL error in the story (Chapter 3b, Joseph was referred to by his real last name instead of Hamilton.) Thanks Peter. If you guys find stuff too, then please tell me owo.
I'm on the hunt for a secondary editor. If anybody is interested, please come talk to me. My current editor seems to have dropped all contact with me, ignoring me for quite a while now (Our last contact was on Thursday. I've texted her every day since. She's seen the messages and chooses not to reply)
Message me if you'd be interested.
Also, just a question. This IS based on VN aspects. Many VNs are quite over-sexualized, with sex scenes being prevelant (or at least the ones I've looked at.). There isn't direct sex in the up and coming chapter (Chapter 6. I decided to write it, since my editor had been taking so long to get to 5. Neither are published), but there is. . . second base. Would you guys feel that this detracts from the overall believablity or integrity of the story? It makes sense, I believe, for the character and for the plot, and it will be used as a plot device in future chapters, I just want to see what you guys want.
Thanks guys.
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Chapters will be published, eventually (Both 5 and 6 are complete.)
Stratege is helping me with editing (although he is not a dedicated editor), so the beginning chapters might get slight updates. It's nothing incredibly major that throws off the plot, though.
My old editor is pretty much done for, we had a talk yesterday and she's out. She'll still look at it but I wont' rely on her for anything anymore. So the position for an editor is still open.
Thanks guys, and sorry for the long wait!
Guess who just lost their second editor.
Joseph, you are officially the biggest asshole I've ever read about ~~
If AJ looks like the one on the image, I'm not suprised he's got a crush on her. I'd fell to her too propably...
Make them live long and happy and sh*t.
Fav + like, looking forward to more of this.
If it was a potato, it would be a good potato.
Cheers
FINDING EDITORS IS HARD
GOODBYE EDTIOR #3.
I will get chapters out. I will I will I will. I have three chapters waiting for you guys.
I just don't want to publish chapters that are not top quality. I also need to discuss ideas and things to make sure that you guys like the ideas. Yay. Sorry for the wait.
its funny how Rarity was Best pony for him now he is like: God you are so Freaking Annoying