Applejack has lost her farm to Flim and Flam and their revolutionary machine, and has been forced to move to Dodge Junction in disgrace. Rainbow Dash discovers a way to win Sweet Apple Acres back for the Apple family, but gets sucked into a situation that will try her loyalty towards her friends. Will Rainbow Dash be able to prevail over all odds and save her friend's livelihood?
At the same time, the Flim Flam brothers are causing unforeseen problems in Equestria. The impact of their machine and its implications causes everypony to realize they have no clue how they will affect the stability of the realm.
My first fanfic, so please bear with me and offer any comments and criticism you see fit. The story is going to start out slow but will pick up, and hopefully be something you enjoy! Let me know if there are any formatting issues; I have been doing a lot of copying and pasting between formats and things might have gotten mixed around.
original and interesting story
I really want to now what happend in the next one chapter
continue soon
But... Dashie wouldn't know what the Apples cider's like would she? It's implied that she's never actually tasted it or at the very least, it's been years since she has.
But I digress. This story's well-written and looks promising.
In the episode with the Super Speedy Cider Squeezy, right as the Apples run out of cider, one of the other ponies (I think Pinkie) hands Rainbow a cup of cider. I assumed she drank it. Thanks for the thought though, character issues like that are important!
things get worse every time
poor pinky
continualo soon
I Want to know what happens next