I'm an amateur fanfiction writer with a love of many fandoms.Expect most of my works to be crossovers.
My entry for Turnabout Storm's "Wright a Bad Ending Contest". NOTE: NOT A CANONICAL ENDING TO THE SERIES!
The verdict has come down, and Rainbow Dash is guilty. She's to be banished from Equestria, and there's nothing Phoenix, Twilight, or anypony else can do to stop it. But not every bad ending is necessarily tragic.
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I AGREE WITH THE GUY BELOW BEST BAD ENDING EVER, YOU ARE FUCKING AWESOME! I had read a different bad ending and ended up crying a bit. But this was great.
Have a stache and a nice day 
I almost cried when the mane 6 were saying their goodbyes
What they said!
I smell an alternate universe spin-off series!!
I really like the different approach you took. There are far too many make-you-wanna-cry-like-a-baby kind of sad stories out there like to add yet another one. You have my support for the contest! (Whatever good will that do
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2326607 If my entry is picked, they'll animate it and give it a voice-over. A rather nifty reward, ne?
2326624 Don't get me wrong, I'd love to see this animated; but I'm just a fan with a Snake avatar, I don't think my opinion will have much impact here.
PS: Trans-dimensional immigration... Phoenix will be in for a helluva lot of paperwork.
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Seconded. This would make for a great spinoff series.
Awesome ending! I made something to go along with it, hope you like it! ^_^ [link]
this the only bad ending that should be expanded upon. There's just so many possibilities
Honestly, I REALLY hope this ending wins the contest. Either way it goes for Phoenix, it won't be a total loss for neither him, Rainbow or Twi. To be honest, no matter which bad ending wins, this is a winner to me.
I prefer happy endings but this one I like
You know, that ending wasn't that bad after all.
Well, this cheered me right up after I saw the demonstration bad end. Dankeschön!
2467266 Bitte, mein Freund!
(And forgive me if I got the suffixes wrong, I only took three years of German, and nearly flunked the last one
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If you aren't interested on expanding this idea, can I get permission to do so? I already have some neat ideas for this.
2691806 I have some ideas for what I'd like to see. But, shoot me a PM with your ideas, and maybe we could work together?
I'll second this. This would be the basis of a great spinoff series.
3136745 I second this.
3330662 Pearl like her bouncy pretzel. It makes her happy. Too bad she can't see it since it's on her head.
You figured out a crucial detail to how Celestia knew about Phoenix at least half a year before it was confirmed, I commend your Powers of Observation and perhaps luck at guessing the truth.
Dude you should do a continuation of this into Trials & Tribulations.
This story really is kind of hilarious in hindsight>>3399024
3466448 Why would it be hilarious? I think it would be a good story.
3466750 I think he's referring to how accurate I was with my guess about how Celestia knew about Phoenix.
3466927 So is it possible for you to make a sequel?
3467155 I want to try to finish Pony Fantasy IV or Infernals first. Two major projects at a time is my limit.
Is it too late to chime in and say that this gets my vote for the best bad end?
Because...yeah. This is good.
...Then again, warm fuzzies always triumphs over depressing chills in my book. Make of that what you will.
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I second sight's comment. I would like to see something like this after you two finish the sequel!
Very good story! I loved it. I felt some of the dialogue was a little too calm considering they were going to lose Rainbow forever, but hey, it made me laugh when I found out what Rainbow's banishment was so it's all good.
I feel the title of the chapter should just be called The "Bad" Ending.
Ok this was a pretty interesting ending. I like that it wasn’t just a sad ending like a lot of other bad endings I saw did. It actually had a pretty interesting idea.
Like what the other comments said if you ever do a sequel to this on RD’s stay in Phoenix’s world I think it would be pretty cool.