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Leo Archon


I'm an amateur fanfiction writer with a love of many fandoms.Expect most of my works to be crossovers.

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The latest scheme of a Townsvillain hurls the Powerpuff Girls to another dimension. In new bodies, and with different abilities each, the three must adjust to life in Ponyville. It helps that the locals are friendly. Maybe the Girls can have actual friends for once, rather than admirers...?

This was actually my first foray into MLP fanfiction. I wrote the beginnings of this long before I conceived of Pony Fantasy IV. So, enjoy my attempt at crossing Lauren Faust's two popular girl shows!

Image courtesy of GalooGameLady on DeviantART. Used with her permission.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 322 )

IT WAS ONLY A MATTER OF TIME! :trixieshiftleft:

...Powerpuff Girls as ponies.... WELP! Fluttershy is no longer the most adorable thanks to Bubbles.

This looks fun and interesting!
Calling it featured box

One thousand times yes. I'm definitely looking forward to Blossom matching wits with Twilight.

As well as the inevitable "team vs. team" and "both teams vs. common enemy" fights that tend to come up in these types of crossovers. Not that that's a bad thing!

If you continue to write everybody in character the way you already seem to be doing then this could be a great story indeed. You've got my star and thumb.

You know whats weird, this is the first PPG - MLP crossover fic that i've seen. I would have expected seeing a lot of these.

But nope, I mostly see Mass Effect crossovers.

Wow...you'd think this would be the most used crossover...and yet this is basically the only one (that I've seen anyway)...very strange :rainbowderp:
Still, its awsome! :rainbowwild:

Now I must wait for the eventual meeting of Bubbles and Fluttershy...its only a matter of time. :pinkiehappy:

557581 Likewise! You'd think I'd have tripped over a hundred of these so far, given the shared creative history, but this is the first PPG/FIM crossover I've seen. Plus it's pretty well-written, which is a bonus.

Think I'll track this one. :yay:

McCrackinXFaust best irl shipping.

This party is going to be BIBLICAL :pinkiehappy:

I Can't believe i remember this show.

and i slowly click another tab on my internet browser

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I did see what you did there dood....:ajbemused:

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Did you know that" This party is going to be BIBLICAL" is almost the same quote from the movie Law Abiding Citizen were the villan/ victim says " This is going to be Biblical".

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Nnope:eeyup:

I've never seen that movie. I just used the term "Biblical" as an expression for Huge or Epic

i want to sing the theme song now...

Oh dear lord. I want to see this.

I'm under the assumption that the reason Pinkie Pie can outrace even Dash is because he consumes so much suger that her molecules have accelerated to the point were a second to her is an hour to everyone else.

Like when FDry drank 300 cups of coffee in Futurama.

Blossom and Buttercup must get Twilight and Bubbles mixed up all the time. What with them sounding so similar and all.

Cannot wait to see the party. :pinkiehappy:
This story = awesome.:twilightsmile:

Keeping a good eye on this one. :twilightsmile:

Hmmmmm. I'm a little worried at how bubbles is easily keeping pace with Rainbow dash.

I love this concept, but do be careful not to overpower the Powerpuffs... or make them god-mode characters that blow the Mane 6 out of the water at every turn. I get that they're super heroes, but if they solve every problem they face with minimal effort it won't make for a good stroy.

560349 Oh, trust me, they'll have their share of problems.

As for Bubbles keeping pace with Rainbow Dash... I remember an episode where the PPG broke the lightspeed barrier. Bubbles knows she's faster than Rainbow, but she's letting the older pegasus keep her pride.

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Ah thanks for clarifying, and the reassurance. I wonder how dash will react when she see's just how crazy fast Bubbles is. (Might wanna mention that they've got Chemical X at that point?) Oh and also... no cutie marks right? Wonder if the CMC will be getting three new members and the PPG/PPF (powerpuff filles) might get three fast new freinds. Hehe! Onto the next chapter!

Bleargh! Threw up too many rainbows of awesomeness! This is not only adorable, but it's very well written, the dialogue is fabulous, and the cutie marks? Genius! This is just entirely too fitting, and henceforth, I shall assume you're secretly Lauren Faust mingling with the bronies. Faved, liked, moustached, and most violently watched!

5/5 :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

560386 Ahem. Read Chapter 2 carefully. I gave the PPG cutie marks.

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Ah, just read it! loving it so far, and I just finished the last chapter.

Just a few gripes though... aren't the PPG's in like kindergarten/grade school? You've listed their age as 12 and I'm not sure about that.

More Importantly though, while it's cool to have them show off thier powers to Mane six, it... kinda feels like you're obviously placing them as superior to the Mane 6. Even if it's not explicit, it feels like the story is shouting: Buttercup is a better applebucker than Applejack, Bubbles is a better flyer than rainbowdash and can speak with animals better than fluttershy, and Blossom is better prepared and better at magic than Twilight. (Seriously? After living with spike for years in a BIGGER library, raising him from an egg, She doesn't know a single anti-fire spell?)
What I'm trying to say is, while the powerpuffs are awesome, I'm worried that you might downplay the abilities, and WORSE, the representation of the Mane 6 in comparison to the PPGs.

I don't mean to seem rude, but I've seen that happen with far, far to many crossovers. I just don't want to see it happen here. It's a little too early to tell now though, and you're keeping the freindly spirit of MLP so far, and that's a plus!
Hope you get something useul out of my comments, and I can't wait to read more.

560550 This story takes place YEARS after the PPG cartoon. So, the Girls are older now.

And worry not, I'm going to do my best to have both sides equally impressed with each other.

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It's not just impressed I'm worried about, it's equal representation throughout your story. Still, to early to know for sure. Thanks for reading my comments.

I totally saw this coming. But who says thats a bad thing?

Oh my god the nostalgia.

Excellent, can't wait for more!

"Normally, mah brother Big Macintosh would haul the wagon, but he went and hurt his ankle, so he ain't up to pullin' nothin' for a while."

I swear, I think Big Macintosh is just trying to avoid work, he gets injured so often in these stories.......... wait, I might be on to something.

Didn't you forget super speed and damage resistance?

561379 And how, pray tell, were they supposed to test either of those? They were in a small forest clearing, and as for damage resistance, the only feasible option would be to have Buttercup smack the other two around, or Blossom blast them with her heat ray. They're sisters, they're not going to hurt each other without a darn good reason.

This was actually my first foray into MLP fanfiction. I wrote the beginnings of this long before ... lol wut (in you description)

561494 What? It's a legit word. It means this was the first time I wrote something pony-related.

Seriously, did you not pay attention in English class? :trollestia: I kid, I kid.

561522 Lol nop thats why I failed (mainly couse of ponies) ok then I guess that clears that up lol :coolphoto:

"As she did so, however, something felt off. Why couldn't she feel her hands?" "Trying to massage her head didn't help that much, especially since she no longer had fingers."
But... but... they don't have hands~! OR fingers! :applecry:

561665 Patience, young pony, and all shall be revealed. :trollestia:

Seriously. I'm going to weave some of the backstory for the PPG into future chapters.

the most epic pic ever done about the PPG's turned into PONIES
http://ppg.snafu-comics.com/?comic_id=231:rainbowkiss::yay:

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They could have done it like Leeroy Jenkins.:flutterrage: It would have tested both powers.

Good job mate! Makes sence Bubbles would keep pace with Rainbow. She flies lightspeed every day!:rainbowdetermined2:

561677 That's... pretty awesome, actually. Too bad it wasn't real. Then again, PPGD is significantly darker than the actual show itself.

Still, I like my choices for the Girls' breeds better.

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