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Leo Archon


I'm an amateur fanfiction writer with a love of many fandoms.Expect most of my works to be crossovers.

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One is a reincarnated demon container. One is a reincarnated half-devil. Both are prominent members of Ponyville's society. When their secrets are revealed, and their respective pasts start catching up to them, will their friendships survive?

A collaboration with Dirty Bit. We own nothing presented in this fic, save the idea.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is owned by Hasbro.
Naruto is owned by Masashi Kishimoto.
Devil May Cry is owned by Capcom.
Title card courtesy of Aakashi on DeviantART

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 138 )

Cool. :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::ajsmug::yay: More. :twilightangry2::flutterrage::fluttercry::fluttershysad::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch: One question, though: When they find out AJ used to be a boy, how are they gonna treat her? And that explains why she doesn't like dresses: BECAUSE she used to be a boy!

1603259 Where does it say AJ used to be a boy?

1603683 ...You're kidding, right? THIS IS A CROSSOVER WITH [REDACTED]. AJ WAS [REDACTED].

1603688 Ahh... Missed that tag. :facehoof:

1603728 I just dont know what went wrong... :derpytongue2:

Redacted due Leo Archon asking for no spoilers.

After the edit:Ok.

1603688>>1605125 Can you two stop with the spoilers? There might be people who haven't figured it out.

i have to wonder what other secrets the rest of the mane six are hiding. also, why has no-one made a crossover involving [djskls] before now? or or were they not very good?

Can't wait to see what happens next!
Please write faster.
I'm already growing impatient :twilightangry2:
ScatMan

Comment posted by Vates Despero deleted Jan 16th, 2013

1606116 And am I to assume you have problems with either of the crossovers presented thus far? It's your prerogative, but don't auto-dislike because you hate one aspect of the story.

Comment posted by Vates Despero deleted Jan 16th, 2013

amazing chapter and idea in general. Now all we need is an explanation for AJ and Rarity. Are they descendants? Reincarnations? and if they are one of the two, will the true naruto and Dante show up? amazing job, keep goin and stay golden^^

K, I figured AJ out. And based on the header, I think I know who Rarity is. You've done gone and got mah attention. :ajsmug:

Oh god. Not only Naruto, but Dante as well. Dear flipping god...:facehoof:

Moar.

Congratulations, little brother. I normally balk at crossovers of these sorts, but you've gotten me interested. I'll continue reading this.

The only critique I have is that while I can see AJ being who she is, Rarity's secret boggles me. I just can't picture her being that person...they're too different. I assume ya'll will go into more depth and explanation about all of this?

Also, Rarity dyeing her mane gave me a good laugh. xD

1656110But her hair is white. Vergil's hair had more of a blue-ish tint to it. Plus she wanted pizza. Only Dante would go for pizza.

1656134I still say she's Dante. All the proof points towards her being Dante and not Vergil. Okay, I consent to the fact that the blade having a sheathe screams Vergil instead of Dante (owing to the fact that every blade Dante ever used NEVER had a sheathe), but I still want to say she's Dante.

1656146
"YOU'LL ALL SEE!":sound of glass being shattered:

"How did you get in my house?!"

:Sound that happens when comic book characters get punched:

Maniacal laughter. "HAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAAHHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!"

:Sound of body being dragged away:

Well... Ponyville's screwed. Keep goin and stay golden^^

I must admit that that I'm a little confused as to who Rarity is, but the mystery is just drawing me in even further. :pinkiehappy:

If anyone can spot the reference to one of Conner Cogwork's fics, they win a cookie!

And now they have to explain. Well, good luck with that.

1749044Kay. No cookie for me, don't feel like looking at his stories. I have enough in my favorites and read later list that will keep me busy for weeks.

Near the beginning, the reference is to Ah ain't got no Ack-cent. So she is Vergil. I figured as much, she's too prissy to be Dante.

ah yea, Vergil. I recently played DMC3 on the HD collection and I was blown away by Vergil. I knew Dante had a brother in DMC1 but never in all my years would I have believed him to be so badass and powerful as Vergil was. Here to hoping that he and naruto's power are both used to continue to bring a certain badass-ness to this story. Keep goin and stay golden^^

1762348 I have the special edition myself. Vergil is very enjoyable to play as :rainbowlaugh:

Did you really have to use the fanon powerless Hokage/civilian mob/all-powerful Council?

1786872 I prefer not to think of Konoha as a militant dictatorship where the Hokage has all the power. At least, not all the time. In times of war, that style works. But in times of relative peace, such as the period when Sasuke defected from Konoha, it makes more sense that a military leader's power be limited by a council of sorts. A council that, if they all unanimously agree on something, can't be easily overturned. Given that different people have different viewpoints, it's rare that a unanimous decision is reached. In the story here, Koharu and Homura cheated a little, using only the civilian half of the council to make the vote. Rest assured, when the shinobi half learns that they were undermined in this instance, they're not going to be happy, just like Tsunade isn't.

As for the mobs... Naruto's past is never explicitly described, hence why so many authors (including myself) tend to depict him as being abused to a degree. Note that I said he hid in the Hokage's office after the first time, and that it was only once a year.

alright then, now that we've got that back story out of the way, let's hear about Vergil and what he's been up to since DMC3. Amazing job, keep goin and stay golden^^

Nice one RD, now we just gotta know how YOU feel about AJ maybe liking mares. :trollestia: Next up is Rarity, I can't wait to see how you spin her story. :twilightsmile:

:rainbowderp: Hm, bravo...Even I didn't expect this kind of backstory. Granted, I have a hand in this, but a part of me thought it would've been post time-skip Naruto.

1791335 I'm not familiar enough with post-time skip Naruto to find an effective point to drop him into Equestria. Besides, by that point, the village's opinion of him had shifted, and he wasn't as much of a pariah.

1791366 True that. Good on ya, nonetheless :twilightsmile:

1788569 We know what he was up to after DMC 3, he got brainwashed by Mundus and turned into Nelo Angelo. Then Dante killed him in Devil may Cry 1. The trip from there to Equestria is where the story lies.

Comment posted by Vates Despero deleted Jan 16th, 2013

1968568 The point I was making was that I was too unfamiliar with post-time-skip Naruto (the series itself, not just the character) to find a suitable point to drop him into Equestria.

Comment posted by Vates Despero deleted Jan 16th, 2013

1968682 Thank you for the suggestion, but it was never my intention to drop OP Naruto into Equestria. Also, part of my intention in writing this is to rewrite Shippuden, so it wouldn't have made sense to do the shift post-time-skip.

Comment posted by Vates Despero deleted Jan 16th, 2013

1968828 Alright, let me clear something up: I was making factual statements myself. The fact of the matter is, I myself am not familiar with post-time-skip Naruto. When you listed a place that would make a good place to drop post-time-skip Naruto into Equestria, it sounded like a suggestion (intent is hard to convey through text, you understand). For what I have planned, though, post-time-skip Naruto just wouldn't work. So, can we move on?

Comment posted by Vates Despero deleted Jan 16th, 2013
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