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Yes I do. I think that a flaw about it because I write in my view and not in concern of the reader sometimes. I expect them to read my mind................................I don't actually. Ehh that's kind of my style though but I can change it a bit, put in more descriptions about the characters like you said. But sometimes I think I am moving to slow so I don't know what to do about that. Give me time. I'm that much of an experienced writer yet. Thanks for the feedback
3593319 Sometimes a chapter does feel slow, especially when writing a fight scene, but sometimes it just happens. Certain parts can be better than others, no story is perfect.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Well I guess I shouldn't push myself so hard. As the writer I see every flaw so that's why I might be so edgy.