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Letters from a Changeling

Dear Reader, I hope someone finds this, that at least someone will see that I am not the monster that I fear I might become…….
I am a Changeling. Part of a society of monsters. I had always hoped that I could escape and live a life among…ponies. But alas, i have not been able to escape my fate. Traditions are of deep importance in the hive….

Chapters (3)

Fear · 14th Sep 2014 · 1,132 words
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Failure · 14th Sep 2014 · 385 words
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Submission · 14th Sep 2014 · 290 words
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RainbowEclipse

RainbowEclipse #1 · Sep 14th, 2014 · · · Submission ·

Hay, every pony! This is my first fanfic, please comment and give me feedback! Thanks!

Rawr_

Rawr_ #2 · Sep 14th, 2014 · · · Submission ·

So, I'll just have a quick look at the story - this is what annoys me the most;

Chapter lengths!!!

If you want positive feedback on things like this, I suggest you combine these chapters into one or you extend them all

Osiris-Stars

Osiris-Stars #3 · Sep 14th, 2014 · · · Submission ·

I absolutely adore how you wrote this! It was amazing. I just wish the chapters were a bit longer, so I'd have more to read. I look forward to reading more of your stories later on good job