When Rarity turns to a habit of occasional gluttony, Fluttershy is more than happy to support her. However, Rarity finds that her small indulgence may have a more profound change in her life...
Note: This is a weight gain fanfiction, so if that isn't your thing than you should probably not read this.
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Rarity, Rainbow and Pinkie seem to have a monopoly on WG stories. Rarity jumps to my personal best pony status when she's plump.
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I agree! Even though I do like Fluttershy as well, Rarity just seems to work best in a weight gain scenario.
By the way, to anyone reading this, let me know if you think of any ideas for this story; since I'm doing it in a sequence of short one-shots, it's hard to come up with an interesting premise for each one that fits into a larger plot. (Pun totally intended.)
I believe you accidentally posted the chapter text twice. Nevertheless, great first chapter.
I like the idea of Fluttershy encouraging Rarity's growth. Some more sinister encouragement might be interesting.
As for ideas, there aren't many places for Fluttershy to take Rarity to fill up on sweets besides restaurants. Perhaps a food-eating contest?
They could go to Sugar Cube Corner, though that depends on if you want to introduce Pinkie into the plot.
Maybe Fluttershy could take Rarity back to her cottage for a "special" dinner?
I suppose it depends where you want to go with the story, but hopefully those couple ideas help stir the brain juices.
An intervention by the others that fails by making her comfort eat more.
She becomes a plus sized model/designer that rockets into stardom, and makes being fat become stylish.
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Thanks for the ideas! You actually got me past my writer's block, and I should have the next chapter up in a few minutes. I'll incorporate some of those ideas if they fit into where I'm going with this, and otherwise I may just use them in a new story!
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Thanks, I write these late at night because I'm nocturnal, so I do get errors here and there.
To all of those who read this chapter and enjoyed it, I'd like to ask a quick question: do you like the direction of a more "sinister" Fluttershy feeding Rarity, or not? Please leave a comment, even if it's a simple yes/no answer!
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I think I already gave you my opinion on that
(yes)
Yes! I like the idea of a sinister Flutters, though I would like to see where it goes if she isn't., maybe she could have some sort of back story to it? Just a few idea's but liking the story so far.
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I don't understand, could you elaborate?
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Thanks!
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Perhaps he meant a reasoning behind Fluttershy's sinisterness? I personally don't really mind, as I think the fat/feeding fetish is enough of a justification for Fluttershy's intentions.
I meant that if she WAS doing it tp be sinister, she could have a reason behind it, though I do like where the story is going anyway, keep it up! And sorry for confusing you
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Yeah, the way I wanted to write it, Rarity enjoys eating and Fluttershy enjoys the weight gain aspect, so they complement each other's interests. Hopefully this latest chapter makes that clearer.
It's perfect! Sorry for the confusion earlier.... :twilight blush: I love the ending of this chapter, it made me giggle.
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I think you did a pretty good job of getting that across.
Besides a couple spelling mistakes, this chapter was great, though I do wonder how Photo Finish will react to Rarity's ever growing frame. I suppose that depends on whether she plans on keeping her as a model or not. Perhaps her large size begins to generate sales, and Photo Finish will encourage Rarity's growth to keep their readers interested?
Regardless, another good chapter all around. While a bit short, it definitely moves the plot along nicely.
You're really good at this
Will Rarity eventually become immobile?
I never realized until I actually wrote a fanfic how much comments mean in terms of feedback and self-esteem boosters. I feel so guilty about never commenting on pretty much all the stories I've read. I am making an effort to respond to every new comment, though!
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I intended for the photo scenario to be a one-time thing. And spelling errors?! If you see any, please point them out, or else I'll be fnticlly rereading this for hours trying to find it. I'm picky about spelling and grammar.
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Thanks!
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Yeah, that's probably where this is headed. However, if you just hate the concept of immobility, then don't read the very last chapter I guess?
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I love the concept of immobility! And I didn't see any spelling or grammar error this time, but I'll make to point them out in the future if I ever come across any!
Also silly Rarity, you don't need a diet, you look beutiful!
...More eclairs?
5241142 Then I honestly can't wait for the final chapter.
Well, I'm finally done with writing filler chapters for the story. This and the one (maybe two?) chapter afterwards will be like chapter three, taking up the whole chapter and not half. So that's good, I guess! As usual, if you have any feedback or catch any errors, and you have enough time on your hands to write a comment, then let me know!
Loving it!
Spike took one look at his plus plus plus sized marsh mellow mare , His eyes watered and he gasped !"Rarity what happened to you?"
"Your still my Spikey Wikey, "
"What do you think?"
"More of you just for me!"
He rushed to hug his dream mare with his claws open.
After the explosion poor Spike was covered by what was Raritys soft marsh mellow filling "What have I done?"
"SPIKE!"
"She walked over to where Raeity laid and set a jug of chocolate milk on the table in front of her."
Raeity should be Rarity
" There had been last minute preparation, one of which included a spell from Twiliggt for temporarily suppressing Rarity's hunger during the trip for convenience."
Twiliggt should be Twilight
-- Rarity thought for a moment. I wanted to tell you something, but then you had dinner already and we just went ahead and ate first... I think it had something to do with a diet, or some other crazy idea."
There needs to be a quotation mark before ' I wanted '
... for a moment. "I wanted to tell you ... diet... crazy idea."
"bouncibg as gravity pulled it ever downwards..."
Bouncing*
Nonetheless I really can't wait for more chapters, godspeed with this wonderful story idea!
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I read this a few days ago but didn't get a chance to comment yet.
I do remember a couple spelling mistakes, but they didn't really detract from the story at all (also I'm on my phone and can't be bothered to go back and find them from a few days ago :P).
I'd love to see Rarity eventually become immobile as you mentioned in a previous comment. It's also interesting to see Rarity starting to catch on to Fluttershy's true intentions. I wonder if whether she eventually will catch on, but at that point is so large that she has to rely on Fluttershy to pick and choose her food for her, at that point completely eliminating any chance for Rarity to recover. It would also be interesting to see where she becomes immobile when she does, whether it's at her own boutique, or somewhere more "comfortable", a small cottage in the woods, perhaps?
Anyways, good luck on writing the next chapter, looking forward to it
Although I don't like the way the story ended, I still liked it...
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What about it? I'm just curious so I can improve. Was it a matter of personal preference, or did I write something wrong?
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Fluttershy just makes it weird and becomes Rarity's warden basically... Just don't like the well you're trapped vibe it gives off. Not your writing.
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Oh. Well, thanks for letting me know, though! Next story I do, I'll probably do a different ending.
And thus Fluttershy stopped beating around the bush and told Rarity the truth. I liked the idea of the cupcake as a choice, and how you initially tricked the reader on its outcome. Great descriptions and imagery as well!
I'm not sure how Fluttershy managed to pass off Rarity's three-month disappearance to her friends, though I suppose they could have merely accepted the idea as it was Rarity's choice after all.
And finally a good open-ending that leaves the rest up to the reader's imagination. Well done
Also now I'm getting ads for dieting and weight-loss.
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I kind of assumed that Rarity's friends would just accept it, and I didn't want to go off track into that subplot. That being said, I may someday write a sequel-ish story where another chararcter gains because of Rarity, but Rarity and Fluttershy are just occasionally used as characters.
I am absolutely pleased with this story for the ending of it. Most would back out of an ending like there were the feedee is at the feeders manipulative desire. Wonderful job on this and I hope to see more like it down the line.
Pure fetish fuel stuff like this needs to be well paced to be enjoyable, and I have to say you did a great job on that. The fic spends enough time on the 'stages' of Rarity's weight to get into the details and goes fast enough to stay interesting. Definitely looking forward to seeing if you write more.
I'm debating with myself whether this story is great or just simply wrong in my opinion. Now whoever the author is I'm not going to judge your story writing type or your possible interests or anyone else's for that matter.
Now before I say it and have people just sending me hate mail about it, I'm going to say that I have a chubby fetish not a BBW or a straight up "Big-as-a-house" fetish but just a normal chub fetish. But I will say that this was nice in the beginning, but as o read through it got more uncomfortable to read. Here's why.
See I understand that people enjoy this kinda thing believe me there are fetishes beyond what you know. But I was feeling as sick as the waitress was in the beginning of the second chapter! I mean think of all the health problems! Heart attacks, liver and kidney failure, and what Wilford Brimley calls, "Diabeetus"
I mean I know it's a fictional story it has no impact in the real MLP world at all but it's just so odd to me.
I mean you can make a secret chapter where Fluttershy finds Rarity dead because of a heart attack! I know that sounds grim and dark but it can happen in this story I'm to assume! And I know it can be hard for people to lose weight, it can be difficult and sometimes impossible for them but in the end is having another slice of cake worth your golden years as an elderly person who is alive and well? Think about that, just give it a good think.
Now I know I sound like I'm attacking this story for being what it is and I have nothing against it at all or the author who wrote it. Besides great job on the story telling and the way you chose Rarity as the weight gainer, it makes a lot of sense when you think about it.
I also know that the author put a warning on the beginning telling me that it would be a weight gain story. What I didn't know was that it would be a BBW story.
It sickens me to know that there are actual people out there who manipulate and persuade people who once had great health into becoming a giant walrus all for a sex appeal!
This story has proved to not fit everyone.(no pun intended)
But I have to be fair and say this story is a good read for the most part. It has an interesting storyline, it presents and depicts the characters perfectly and was enjoyable.
What do I think of it? Well you already know. But just in case you didn't quite understand, let me explain.
I didn't like it because the fact that Rarity keeps gaining weight and only has second thoughts rarely. And Fluttershy is their to encourage her to keep ruining her health.
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I can completely understand what you mean. I would never do that, endorse weight gain, or encourage anyone else in real life; but just consider that this is a story. It was meant purely as a fetish fic and a random, fictional tale. Obviously this is so fictional that it breaks most realities of health and basic life, but I wrote it in a way I thought was enjoyable purely as a fantasy, nothing more. Just thought I'd clear that up.
Lol next chapter plz!!!!
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It's complete now, but I might do a sequel with different characters if people like this story.
>> iceblazethequick aw dang
5371606 Yes, please, do that, please...............please
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I'll try, I just procrasinate on most of my stories. I pretty much only get stuff posted when enough people pester me about it.
Good first chapter. Just 1 small error:
1. Pegasus shouldn't be capitalized.
Other than that, excellent writing.
That was really good! You have a talent for descriptions, and despite there never being more than a naughty tease, this was a really sexy story. Excellent work!
You should do a sequel where Fluttershy starts putting on weight like Rarity. As she grows bigger and needing help with Rarity and her self she gets somone like Rainbow dash, Tree hugger, Or any of her friends help her.