• Member Since 14th May, 2018
  • offline last seen March 21st

SuperDescendant101


E

Note: This is a remake of How I Met MLP: Equestria and Canterlot High Trouble

This story is about how I am adult and meeting one of the Princesses of Equestria, they are seeking my help for the first time in my life and somehow it's not the same anymore. I will travel to many worlds to fight for my family and friends now with the newly acquired Gem of Imagination from the pedestal, I have to save Equestria and many other worlds from total disaster. But will I ever see my family again? How will I save the world? Find out now on Gem of Imagination: Universal Forces.

For reference, the Gem of Imagination is a magical item that was given to me as a special request. it was designed to create anything that wielder can think of, to swords, elements, etc. The creators are called the Imaginators, they are what people see as a vision or thought, not a real thing.

Note: The original will still be up, but hopefully you will see the new an improved one. Thank you. P.S. This story contains characters that are from the games or series I like and not part of the tags.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 3 )

Aahhh! An update. This story of yours is interesting. Definitely puts this on my tracking. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Man, it's been a while. Hope you've been good SuperDescendant. It's kinda surprising how much was changed between this and the last story, though you've certainly improved with this story. The bit with the colored door was a nice touch to hint at him being imaginative before being told that he has an active imagination. The stuff with Rainbow and Brain talking about martial arts was enjoyable. (hope to see more of the show/not tell and character interactions now that the Ponyville poachers have been dealt with for the time being) And I think this story's greatest strength is that I don't know where it'll go next. First chapter goes from human poachers already in Equestria (which I can't think of many fics doing that, so good job keeping this fresh), and the second chapter introduces portals to different worlds. Can't wait to see where the twists and turns of this story take Brain. The evil copy felt a bit out of left field but it at least adds to him having a major imagination. I think the one thing this could improve with in the future is to make sure we get the details of what the characters do; like if the story has six characters in one part, give detail about how all of them react the the story, not just one of them. (But without it dragging the story). Can't wait to see what chapter 3 holds!

Thanks Pickle, I certainly your ready for some entertainment in the future.

Login or register to comment