It is fine just make sure he does not stay like that forever.
I know it’s a fan sin to give that out to OC’s, but I promise he paid for it. You’ll see.
Oh man I hope not all members of the eight end up being blabbering fools after paying the same price, it would be more interesting if each one of them paid it in most useful memories to them or memories that defined them the most. This could be the seal blue text is speaking about. Instead of the eight teaming up in less than a week they could struggle for months or some years (less OC's for a moment and easier to handle plus potential to pull deus ex machina two or three times with one of the group breaking the seal) until they one by one or two at once slowly reform their group.
11910400 lol yeah, he’s definitely overstimulated! And has some attention issues.
The others all have unique problems of their own but not these same ones. They all have their own plot threads… Six’s situation makes me laugh more than it should…
I know it’s a fan sin to give that out to OC’s, but I promise he paid for it. You’ll see.
I know there's the stereotype of alicorn OCs being looked down on, but I think that's more a relic of the older fandom. Human-to-alicorn stories are actually really popular right now, and tend to do quite well.
Caught a typo.
It will be interesting to see how thing turn out for this pony.
I look forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you for enjoying so far.
It is fine just make sure he does not stay like that forever.
Oh man I hope not all members of the eight end up being blabbering fools after paying the same price, it would be more interesting if each one of them paid it in most useful memories to them or memories that defined them the most. This could be the seal blue text is speaking about.
Instead of the eight teaming up in less than a week they could struggle for months or some years (less OC's for a moment and easier to handle plus potential to pull deus ex machina two or three times with one of the group breaking the seal) until they one by one or two at once slowly reform their group.
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lol yeah, he’s definitely overstimulated! And has some attention issues.
The others all have unique problems of their own but not these same ones. They all have their own plot threads… Six’s situation makes me laugh more than it should…
Really enjoying the whimsy in this chapter, super fun.
Also very good job painting a picture in my mind, real well written so far.
I know there's the stereotype of alicorn OCs being looked down on, but I think that's more a relic of the older fandom. Human-to-alicorn stories are actually really popular right now, and tend to do quite well.