I adore this story, like yes, the writing is superb, fluid and well paced, but I am in love with the MC. His thoughts are an absolute pleasure to read.
if you are looking for some nature-related names, you could always go with something like Cypress, Sylvan, or Yarrow. If you want something pertaining to his smell and somewhat trashy state, you could go with Detritus, Tatter, Mildew, or humorous like Whiffy.
11933533 Yeah it’s quite obvious she lost her foal and is now producing milk for other mothers to use. Also, great story so far. I honestly hope you keep it to one MC for now as following along with others this early gets overwhelming.
This is what happens when you put all your stats into intelligence and none into wisdom. You get someone that tries to go into the potted plant and not the toilet.
I like how whimsical his thoughts are ! It's funny coupled with classical human dread but the infant body making it impossible almost to stay on subject. Heh it must be something to witness, a fully-grown human consciousness influenced by a alicorn (if I remember this fic right) foal body.
Can't wait for him to get his name too ! And perhaps Luna hitching a ride as a spectator since she don't have much to do for now hehe.
Usually, milk is only produced in the time after foal-birth, for as long as the milk is used. This mare is likely to have had a foal previously.
That 'nsfw' scene was really weird, I will listen to the warnings in the future for sure.
I adore this story, like yes, the writing is superb, fluid and well paced, but I am in love with the MC. His thoughts are an absolute pleasure to read.
if you are looking for some nature-related names, you could always go with something like Cypress, Sylvan, or Yarrow. If you want something pertaining to his smell and somewhat trashy state, you could go with Detritus, Tatter, Mildew, or humorous like Whiffy.
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Yeah it’s quite obvious she lost her foal and is now producing milk for other mothers to use. Also, great story so far. I honestly hope you keep it to one MC for now as following along with others this early gets overwhelming.
This is what happens when you put all your stats into intelligence and none into wisdom. You get someone that tries to go into the potted plant and not the toilet.
Did he just give her the raspberry?
Given who this mare (probably [almost definitely]) is, most of the names would probably be related to a certain kind of fruit.
Thus, for your consideration, for his name, I submit Lucky Clover, Viridian, Verdant, Green Vale, Terran, and Tellus.
I don't think the NSFW warning is neccesary here since you don't describe anything sexuall. Other than that I have nothing important to say.
adorable little one enjoyed his meal. cant wait to see him acting too smart for his own good later and accidentally calling her mom
think you worried too much about the scene. wasnt NSFW at all, you're good.
I like how whimsical his thoughts are ! It's funny coupled with classical human dread but the infant body making it impossible almost to stay on subject.
Heh it must be something to witness, a fully-grown human consciousness influenced by a alicorn (if I remember this fic right) foal body.
Can't wait for him to get his name too ! And perhaps Luna hitching a ride as a spectator since she don't have much to do for now hehe.
Thank you for writing !
That was me smacking sense into you.
Sorry.