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Ponyville is holding a concert and party to honor the years that Princess Celestia has been ruler of Equestria! Twilight and her friends are tasked with an important responsibility to organize the event upon her arrival. Along the way, they meet a new friend named Jazz, the unicorn musician who will be performing at the concert. Jazz is holding auditions for a soloist part in his new song that he is writing for the concert, to which the ponies agree to participate. However, they soon find themselves pushing their friendship to the limits as they battle each other for the part. Who will win?

Hope you guys like my FIRST PUBLISHED story. I am new to the site so greetings to everyone here!

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 8 )

Very cute start! I've noticed some typos and grammar issues and wonder if you'd mind me tossing you a pm or somesuch to point them out? they're not major so don't fret, I edit so I'm kinda wired to notice stuff.:twilightsheepish:

Mystery powder in the pies? Nice idea. :rainbowlaugh: I like the recipe though for me I like to add nutmeg and a tiny bit of cloves along with a touch of mint. helps bring the flavour out :twilightsmile:

Very cute fic! it feels a bit short in areas, namely where he's chatting with the main 6, but nothing that's a deal breaker. I hope to read more from you in future Whether it's a standalone fic or something in a collab.

Wow, awesome! The simplicity of the story is pretty straightforward and you've captured their personalities perfectly. Not bad! :twilightsmile:

You only live once (YOLO)

LMAO. Thanks for adding that little bit of comedy in there.

Also, love the fight scene with the Mane Six.

Comment posted by EmiryLi deleted Mar 27th, 2013

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Thank you! Glad you liked it!

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