Six years have passed since the second civil war of Equestria. For some, it has been an uneasy peace, and when the mysterious group who call themselves 'the Order' and claim to serve the Goddess arrive on the scene once again, the world is thrown into chaos once more. The Crusaders, along with an enigmatic time traveler called Scratch and his allies, are thrown against fate, and the might of all the Order, and they are among the only ones in the world with a chance to stop their dark designs.
Chapters (64)
I finish the first one just to find the second has just been posted. Today is a good day.
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You lucked out, huh? Glad you enjoy it!
I was wondering when discord would show up. Glad to see this story updating so frequently. I'm really enjoying where this is going. Keep it up!
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Thanks! Glad to have some feedback!
CONFUSING TIME TRAVEL THINGAMAJIGS!!!!!
Admittedly, it's not all that confusing, though it probably could have been worded better. All in all, liking the story a lot so far. Keep up the good work!
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Yeah, I kinda went out on a limb with this part of the story. I hope it's received well.
Good to hear you like it!
I'm hoping that Joey doesn't become the typical alicorn oc mary sue.
Thankfully, it seems like he's a little too young to play a huge role in all the fighting, so I guess I shouldn't worry too much. I'm curious as to just how much planning The Doctor put into this before he died (if faking his death wasn't part of the plan...), and I'm hoping that all the little pieces of information he's left to everyone finally start coming together to make a complete picture.
Here, have a moustache.
This game is really messed up...
Sure Derpy is safe, but what about all the people who lived in the houses that got leveled? Even if they weren't home, now they're homeless!
Still, looking forward to how this turns out. Keep it up!
ok a little slow but good none the less.
I must admit, you write fight scenes amazingly well, whether they be for humans or ponies. Also, Quick Fix's obsession with Ratchet and Clank is adorable. Keep up the good work!
THIS IS HOW FAR I GOT IN 6 HOURS, INCLUDING THE FIRST BOOK.
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