And suddenly, things take a strange turn. The "Promise me you won't tell anyone I came by" is incredibly fishy, to say the least. Also, if "I" was thinking at the end, shouldn't I be thinking "Next thing I know" instead of "Next thing you know"? Just wanted to point that out.
Admittedly, I had a feeling something didn't seem right with it, even when I first posted it in the SFG forum. I think I was mixing 'thinking' with 'internal monologue' and it came out like that. Thanks. Editing now.
At first I did not like 2ed-pony stories, but now I am hooked, and this si the first one I have seen to holed mutable chapters, I am going to have a fun time reading this
Alllright. All the mares love me. Giggity giggity goo.
And suddenly, things take a strange turn. The "Promise me you won't tell anyone I came by" is incredibly fishy, to say the least.
Also, if "I" was thinking at the end, shouldn't I be thinking "Next thing I know" instead of "Next thing you know"? Just wanted to point that out.
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Admittedly, I had a feeling something didn't seem right with it, even when I first posted it in the SFG forum. I think I was mixing 'thinking' with 'internal monologue' and it came out like that. Thanks. Editing now.
I get all the Mare's Yeah, *pony -struts*
At first I did not like 2ed-pony stories, but now I am hooked, and this si the first one I have seen to holed mutable chapters, I am going to have a fun time reading this
Hmmmm.
Why you don't want anyone to know you're here huh?
Well...um
Actually...
...
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Ladies Please Control Your Orgasms
there is plenty of me to go around
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