Nice ending! Hope to see more 2nd person stuff from you soon, very well done.

Love this chapter. I hope to expect more from you.

Nice I laoughed hard at Pinkies and Twi's gift.

But I am sad, I was so sure this was going to end with 6 Pregnant marefriends and one pissed of Big mac

Ah Man...It finished.
Well I hope to see more writting from you!

Sweet fluffy mercy!
I could say that this reached the Good End 1 heheheheheh

And as I said thank you my friend that at least this colt has gone went to the good ending and you delivered. Thanks for the good read!

So, uh, lemme' get this straight... I'm now a private booty call for all 6 of the EoH?

Sweet.

~AC

Oh ho ho honh! I loved this!

Hope to see more from you, mate!

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...Yeah, pretty much. I never figured out a name (or cutie mark) for this OC, so I just call him the Ponyamorist. If I figure out something else (name, looks, cutie mark, etc.), I might mention it in a blog post.

i wish something like this would happen to me.. hahaha

If we still had stars to give, you'd have gotten four.
Only that many because it had to end.

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Agreed.

Oh god lol

why cant i be this good with people

im such a player
damn dude this story is just epic
please whrite more

I read this story and

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So what the ending implies is that I am personal manwhore to six mares?

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'Manwhore' is such a crude term. It's not just the sex, though that is a not-so-bad perk. And the feeling is mutual, so you have to remember to look at it from the other way. You have six mares that will look only to you for companionship.

404983 I guess that leaves my previous statement all wibbly wobbly timey wimey.

I'm not sure where the term 'tuck in' came from when it pertains to eating, but it's just one of those phrases that stuck with me ever since I first heard it (might have read it in a book or watched it in an episode of Doctor Who, I can't remember). It's just a little bit of my own personality peeking into my writing. Besides, to 'tuck in' sounds more...quaint compared to 'eat'. It seems, I don't know...gentle or refined. It just sounds better to me.

I won't apologize for it. I will apologize if I constantly repeat words or phrases (which I try to avoid), but if my own personality or style decides to pop up in my writing, well...there's no helping that, is there? Just a writer's fault and foible.

Your choice of music pleases me greatly.

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Thanks! Editing now.

SOOO MUCH WIN!!! 0
when i read the book title. i was like then

Ah, a very fun and lighthearted read. Well done!

ooh noooooo I dont * I * wouldnt end it like that i would keep going and fuck all 6 and be a father and never let any thing happen to them and go out with them and ohh man so much fuck

wait and so many children CRAP

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Have you read my other story, 'The Truth'? It's an alternate universe sequel where 'you' actually do have kids.

1473630 Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!

HAHAHAHAHA
THAT ENDING IS PRICELESS.

I DEMAND MORE LIKE THIS!!!

wow nice story, one of my faviort parts was fluttershy you did it quite well. now off to read more of your stories
5 moustaches to you

I simply MUST say this: No matter how hard I try, I cannot read ANY story without laughing when Yakety Sax/ The benny Hill Theme is playing. Just try it! Check out Any story that's not funny and read it to Yakety Sax. YOU WILL LAUGH!
Anyway, FANTASTIC story! I loved the concept, and you pulled it off flawlessly! Very well done, my friend!
P.S. While reading this, I got the distinct impression that 'I' was a true sir and gentleman. I read it as such and loved that too!

Bow Chicha Bow Wow!

I couldn't find any "get all the bitches" images so I'll settle for this
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Please refrain from the under use of pinkies in future comment.exe save files.
Backup restored.

So are they a herd now?

6526780 Technically, yes, they are.

I should note, though, that this fic was made when the MLP fandom was still pretty new, and the idea for this stemmed from people making second-person sensual fics of 'you' and a certain pony. Someone back on the Ponychan threads was all, "I've seen one for each of the Mane 6, but can anyone write a fic with all of the Mane 6 at once?" I'd never written pony fiction at the time this was mentioned, so I gave it a go.

Herding practice was never brought up before (I think this was well before Xenophilia brought that issue to light), and this fic was very well received (at least to my belief) by the Sensual Fiction community.

Dude that was one of yhe best stories I've read. Goodjob 10/10 definently reading again.

That was, without a doubt, the most satisfying, cute and heartwarming story I have ever read. Well done!

Ahahahaha! Ah man dude. Good luck! Your gonna need it handling six mares! Hahahaha!

Anyway, very good story and well played out. 10/10, hopes for more content like this.

You set the bottle down and walk up to Fluttershy. “Thank you.” You raise your forelegs and catch her in a hug before she manages to completely back away, and the scent of vanilla and lavender once again teases your sense of smell. The very faint trace of sweat from dancing mixes in, but images in your head slowly start to suggest other instances where the smells of lavender, vanilla and sweat could mingle…

Is this like Amortentia? Nice gift, Fluttershy.

So, did the relationship end up as a herd, as they call it? That's what it seems like.