I have read all the chapters and so far...its pretty darn good! What makes me wonder tho is that when I was reading these chapters I kind of imagined this situation like one of those japanese dating sims. And figured that this colt would be one lucky horse.
So all in all, please make this one with epic twists with a good ending! I hate to see this colt disappointed!
This story has already been finished for a long time. I'm just uploading it here on FIMfiction.net and revising as I see fit.
Somepony on Ponychan's Sensual Fiction General thread (a LOOOONG time ago), suggested somepony write a 2nd-pony perspective fic involving the entire mane 6. I thought it seemed like a good enough idea as any and gave it a shot.
I has a feeling that everypony's gonna be all '"Whut?" in disappointment.
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Thank ye kahndly fer noticin' th' reference t' Arlen.
SO, Fluttershy and my self gave Dash an orgasm in front of everypony?
kinky! hahaha
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So it would seem.
At least it wasn't in ten seconds flat.
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Hope Twilight has a mop. or ate least a towel
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...Pretty much? I kinda doubt that Rainbow Dash would have turned it down. She doesn't seem like the type to turn down a challenge.
Keep in mind that it was with and around people she trusts. I should think that if anypony else were there, she might not have gone through with it.
I have read all the chapters and so far...its pretty darn good! What makes me wonder tho is that when I was reading these chapters I kind of imagined this situation like one of those japanese dating sims. And figured that this colt would be one lucky horse.
So all in all, please make this one with epic twists with a good ending! I hate to see this colt disappointed!
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This story has already been finished for a long time. I'm just uploading it here on FIMfiction.net and revising as I see fit.
Somepony on Ponychan's Sensual Fiction General thread (a LOOOONG time ago), suggested somepony write a 2nd-pony perspective fic involving the entire mane 6. I thought it seemed like a good enough idea as any and gave it a shot.
There's a good reason I like pegasi.
... No comment. But wait this is a comment. Maybe if I end off it will be no comment?
Just a small error I noticed.
You narrow her eyes. “Truth,” you say. It should be 'your'
Dude pegisi can have orgasms like that 0_0 sweeeeeeeet
horny much rainbow?
w-what?!?