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SFC Ponycron


I love to read and write fiction and fanfiction. I'm 34 years old, married, and a gamer....I think that's it, other than Vinyl Scratch is best background pony. :P

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A nice read. Update ASAP. :twilightsmile:

I like where this is going. Can't wait to see more. :moustache:

This is pretty cool....Tracking!

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Maybe it's a book about vibrators! :pinkiegasp:

Alllright. All the mares love me. Giggity giggity goo.

And suddenly, things take a strange turn. The "Promise me you won't tell anyone I came by" is incredibly fishy, to say the least.
Also, if "I" was thinking at the end, shouldn't I be thinking "Next thing I know" instead of "Next thing you know"? Just wanted to point that out.

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Admittedly, I had a feeling something didn't seem right with it, even when I first posted it in the SFG forum. I think I was mixing 'thinking' with 'internal monologue' and it came out like that. Thanks. Editing now.

I get all the Mare's Yeah, *pony -struts*

At first I did not like 2ed-pony stories, but now I am hooked, and this si the first one I have seen to holed mutable chapters, I am going to have a fun time reading this

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At least for this chapter.

:pinkiehappy: Yay for update! Hope for another one soon.

I WISH IT WAS LONGER!!!!!!!!!!

I am really really really really linking this! wait that four really's? umm it dose not work like with four ever's.

any way great story Nice Up date. I am a little mad how under rated this is.

But Please don't give up!.

Admittedly, I was not expecting this much love for my fic.

Chapter Four will need to have a bit of touching up done (I'm never satisfied with my own work, even if it is finished). Don't want to disappoint anypony.

Awesome! Been waiting for this to update!

This isn't gonna turn out well...at least, I hope not. :trollestia:

Instantly favourited when I saw this was uploaded

I has a feeling that everypony's gonna be all '"Whut?" in disappointment.

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Thank ye kahndly fer noticin' th' reference t' Arlen. :eeyup:

SO, Fluttershy and my self gave Dash an orgasm in front of everypony? :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

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So it would seem.
At least it wasn't in ten seconds flat. :twilightblush:

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Hope Twilight has a mop. or ate least a towel

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...Pretty much? :twilightblush: I kinda doubt that Rainbow Dash would have turned it down. She doesn't seem like the type to turn down a challenge.

Keep in mind that it was with and around people she trusts. I should think that if anypony else were there, she might not have gone through with it. :scootangel:

I have read all the chapters and so far...its pretty darn good! What makes me wonder tho is that when I was reading these chapters I kind of imagined this situation like one of those japanese dating sims. And figured that this colt would be one lucky horse. :pinkiehappy:

So all in all, please make this one with epic twists with a good ending! I hate to see this colt disappointed! :eeyup:

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This story has already been finished for a long time. I'm just uploading it here on FIMfiction.net and revising as I see fit.

Somepony on Ponychan's Sensual Fiction General thread (a LOOOONG time ago), suggested somepony write a 2nd-pony perspective fic involving the entire mane 6. I thought it seemed like a good enough idea as any and gave it a shot.

The first time I posted this chapter in the SFG, I felt it was somewhat rushed at the beginning. This edit feels a bit more structured, and this is slowly becoming my second-favorite chapter. I hope y'all enjoy!

:pinkiegasp: Another update please! :pinkiehappy:

Not bad. I liked this chapter. You possess quite a unique sense of humor.

You know, this is making me wonder if more...intimate...interactions between Unicorns seem more...magical...than when non-magic-users do it.
Of course, doing it while flying's GOT to be a rush all it's own. Hmm...skydiving...would that count as indecent exposure?

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Way back when the Sensual Fiction General thread was still young (maybe two or three threads old), it was slowly established that each kind of pony had a 'special' or secondary way of getting their rocks off. Earth ponies had flank/hoof teasing, pegasi had wingies and unicorns had horn-play.

Also, I've read many a fic where it's established that pegasi and earth ponies have their own inherent magic (pegasi being able to walk on clouds and control weather, earth ponies being a lot stronger in hoof or more energetic than most, etc.), so it's not like pegasi and earth ponies aren't getting the short end of the stick where abilities are concerned...

...And now that you mention the concept of bumping uglies while flying, it kinda gives me an idea about another SenFic involving Spitfire and joining the mile-high club... :pinkiegasp: :scootangel:

and you end it there!, before Twilight Fluttershy, and Dash? well After Rainbow recovers that is.. why did you stop? why not keep going till all six of them kissed their man?

Can't wait for him and Dashie to go at it. :rainbowdetermined2::heart:


~Jack

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Well that idea is turning out great. Will there be any chance that you might make another one. Because I find the way this fiction is written incredibly awesome. It is quite rare to find these 2nd person fics here especially with the mane 6 involved. But if for any chance I would say, make a flash dating sim about MLPFIM, would it be alright if I would use some parts of this story or base this story to make this the 1st good ending? :eeyup:

Please sir can i have some more? :pinkiesad2:

sweet cant wait to kiss fluttershy

There will be an epilogue to this! Anyone who's ever been to the SFG knows it!

Fluttershy's part when I posted this in the SFG was reasonably smaller than what I have now. I was always working with Fluttershy in the sense that she never asks for much. I'm sorta iffy in regards to how I wrote Fluttershy's part, but feel free to tell me your thoughts.

I know that Rainbow Dash's part was cut off, but blame Twilight. She was quiet the whole time, and seeing you with the others didn't help much in the way of patience.

GIGGITY-GIGGITY-GOO! :pinkiehappy:

I approve of Dashie's teasing!~ :rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh:

Good chapter, I didn't really notice any errors. Good one, and can't wait for the epilogue!



~Jack

Hmm, epilouge coming?
Ah, that means that the end of this fic will soon come to an end.
I'm thinking of the situation right now and I hope what happens next is what's playing in my mind!
See Ya until next chapter.

I never knew I was so promiscuous..

I cant wait for the ending :pinkiehappy: I wonder what they're gonna do, As if its not obvious :twilightblush: :unsuresweetie: And spike didn't get to see a second of this, Despite how funny it is. :moustache:

Nice ending! Hope to see more 2nd person stuff from you soon, very well done. :pinkiehappy:

:rainbowlaugh: Love this chapter. I hope to expect more from you.

Nice I laoughed hard at Pinkies and Twi's gift.

But I am sad, I was so sure this was going to end with 6 Pregnant marefriends and one pissed of Big mac

Ah Man...It finished.
Well I hope to see more writting from you!:pinkiehappy:

Sweet fluffy mercy! :trollestia:
I could say that this reached the Good End 1 heheheheheh:trollestia::heart:

And as I said thank you my friend that at least this colt has gone went to the good ending and you delivered. Thanks for the good read!:yay:

So, uh, lemme' get this straight... I'm now a private booty call for all 6 of the EoH?

Sweet.:trollestia:

~AC

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