It's night time at the crusaders clubhouse, it's also the perfect time for them to tell each other some scary stories. Meanwhile outside Big Mac decides to listen in on her little sister and her two friends tell their stories. So stick around readers and prepare to read these three fillies horrifying tales.
Note: The plot is similar to the Simpson's first Treehouse of Horror, so I'm not really sure if that counts as a crossover but I 'll added it anyways.
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Sounds good!
Treehouse of horrors mixed with ponies? Interesting.... Please go on dear sir!!!
You have my attention.
I noticed you typed in "Her littlest sister." it should be "His littlest sister."
Thank xd77, I just fixed it.
2997109 well you never know with bigmac the fanfics are a crazy place for him one times hes a murder, the other times hes gay and another times he might be female :D
2999282 I beg to differ.
I read the chapter title and thought of invader zim
3141203
Really now?
WOW WHAT A GOOD STRY
3337762
If you like this try reading the sequel.
not scary at all, grow some balls mac
If you added a crossover tag, then why don't I see it?
5198314
Yeah I removed it recently.
This was okay.
The stories weren't really that scary, and the grammar was bad, but I liked the original storyline. If you need an editor, I would be happy to help!
I'm starting to get Treehouse of Horror vibes from this story.
3364929 I think Big Mac is supposed to represent Homer Simpson from Treehouse of Horror. Remember Homer got scared at the end? So the author decided to do the same with Big Mac.
2999282
Yea maybe but not here
And so it began, the famous "Clubhouse of Horror" series..... I am glad I can finally read this.
And you did very good. I probably said this under later parts of the series already, but you have a great talent for capturing the spirit and atmosphere of telling ghost stories in a lone, empty clubhouse at night..... I almost felt like I'm there with them and I could fully visualize the individual stories in my head.
I love the dark take in the third one and the two twists it had (especially considering how I expected that you would go down the Slendermane route when I read about the pony having a white face and wearing a suit) and the first one never made clear whether the unicorn stallion was really possessed by the fiend or if he cracked under the pressure and abuse by his parents, which gives the story a nice bit of depth.
An excellent start for the series, which also gets a place in my favourites for being a fantastic Cutie Mark Crusaders fic and a shudder-inducing collection of horror stories.
A good story, but could really use some spellcheck and editing- there's quite a few grammatical errors and misspellings, as well as a handful of incorrectly used words, that detract from the experience somewhat.
Overall though, I enjoyed it.