A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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Wow, that was your first story? I'm very impressed.
5546540 Thank you; it's the first thing I've written with the exception of a few story-assignments in English way back when. Can't take all the credit though - my two editors/proofers helped me tremendously.
too soon to judge in my opinion. Or maybe "not enough you need more" is a better way to put it?
5547135 Mm, what do you mean by more? Do you think the chapter should've been longer or more expansive or something else? Sorry if the question bothers you, I'm just desperately trying to grasp some form of feedback. ^^;
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More than just this first chapter before I feel I can drawn any conclusions about the story quality.
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http://youtu.be/zise5g2zU9M?t=15m10s
OHHHHHHHHh. :3
Before ah even read the story, ah gotta say how excitin' the synopsis is!!!
Ah'm nervicited ta see what you typed out! *squeee*
This is GOOD!
AHHHH!!!! *squees* AHHHHH!!!!!
Yer amazin!!!!!!!
Y'know, this guy could probably make a case for being owed 1000 years' worth of back pay with cost-of-living adjustments.
sigh i don't like him
He still talks in normal english and seems more like a self insert than an actual guard from the past, he's only slightly surprised by everything going on, and the events of the story go by really fast
5916960 inappropriate use of "sigh"
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Hilarious!
And you have my attention!
Nice beginning. I start reading.
6895447 ... Your profile picture looks like one of my friend's Dad...
Seriously, it's similar enough to register as him but different enough to activate the uncanny valley response... (Sorry if I'm insulting or something, my brain is fried from homework...)
how to quit like a boss
7137015 but Deborah isn't even in this fix. ..
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Shhhhhhhhh.
I do believe I like this fellow, he's got moxie.
Like #666, beautiful