A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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...and the ball keeps rolling.
5575843 I tried throwing my cousin's kids in front of it but it wouldn't stop.
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...there's a punchline, right?
5576661 Does their mom hitting me count? She has a helluva of a right.
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Ouch. Should have LEFT it up to her to deal with, eh?
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That is a great pic. However, I should probably stop with the puns before it gets worse...
Nah. That pic fit just right.
5584450 I think your link shut my brain down.
5576855... your puns...
Now ah get why ya commented on mah page.
First, ah think ya have plenty of potential. Heck, you know how ta write.
But readin' about hospitals, threatenin' whiny nobles, and searchin' for blood tests ain't mah cup of tea.
To be honest, ah thought the story was goin' another route. Perhaps the former Royal Guard would experience tremendous pain for losin' his loved ones, an' that would be a theme.
Maybe Celestia gave 'im a handsome stipend for invaluable services to the crown and provides him enough bits to own property in Ponyville.Heck, the cliche route of savin' somepony against Timberwolves would'a been a might more interestin.Ah appreciate the work that you've put into yer story. Writin' ain't easy.
But ah thought this type of story would be heavier on details, have more self-exploration, and include possible Luna bondin' since he understood the culture stemming 1,000 years ago.
Ah wish you the best of luck. *hugs*
PS - Ah striked the stipend part. Forgot that it's in this here chapter. *giggles* Silly me.
PPS - Ah think it's all about presentation. Every chapter after number one felt like filler.
5712734 FUCK YOU.
it is IMPOSSIBLE to not read that in apple blooms voice, and the serious nature of you comment is completely lost.
Alright Alright! I take everything back! I'm sorry!
...
But you still miss more than just a few 'great'... XD
Not sure if its my headcanon or what, but I dont see a guard from a thousand years ago acting the way Barrier is.
I love Cadence in this.
After reading this chapter, (and getting more familiar with Futurama), I can't help but wonder; if cryogenic freezing - like that in science-fiction, ever becomes a reality; I wonder how many people would try to abuse it, in the hopes of returning to their banks or trust funds and benefitting from the accumulated interest?
Yeah, I know, dumb comment. I mostly made it to get out of my system, anyway.
Hmm.
As fun as it is to see Barrier interacting with his descendants and just being a major troll, I have to say that him pretending to flirt with Shining Armor, who knows who he is, makes me...very uncomfortable.