Prologue - A Hopeful Revival
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...nothing. No light, no sound. No voice, nothing but plain darkness. A hand that belong to no one was lifted and pushed aside something. A door was opened, revealing a short spiky orange hair with Ahoge, wearing a simple blue sweater with a hoodie. He has black sweats and black-and-white sneakers and laces. His eyes were dark blue and his skin was pale white.
Yes, this is me. My name is Ren Loodan. I just remember who I am, it's nice to meet...me. I instantly fell down on the ground, not even prepared on the landing as I landed on my forehead.
"Oww..." I muttered as I rub my aching forehead. Yep, that's gonna leave a mark. "Huh? Where am I?" I looked around and saw that I was in some strange white room, it looked a lot like futuristic, not exactly from my time. I got up and looked at where I landed. Apparently, it was some kind of chamber I awoken in, weird.
"Just...what is this place?" I don't understand, I looked around the room and and saw it looked like it hasn't been used in years, judging how everything looks.
"Oh wait, maybe this is a dream? And I'm still dreaming, right?" I instantly grabbed my cheek, but that only hurt another part of my body.
"Okay, so this isn't a dream? So where am I?" I kept thinking and thinking on where the heck am I, but nothing. I can't remember anything, just my name, my family-
Wait, my family! Oh no, what happened to them? I looked around to see if this lab had a way out of here. I ran around the room to even look up close to find a exit, but nothing.
"Where's the exit? There has to be one, right?!" I said as I kept touching the walls, thinking that maybe there could be a door hidden away in sight. As I kept the walls, I felt something I touch, I looked at where I touch for a while, and knocked on it hard.
BAM! BAM! BAM!
This part of the wall, it seems light weighted than the other part of the walls. I pushed it, which caused the wall to open vertically and caused me to fall...again.
"Ooof!" I got up again and saw...a room? What the? It looked like any normal bedroom I ever saw in my life. A normal bed, a normal closet, and a window...wait a minute, a window!
I instantly ran towards and saw outside, it was colorful, full of greenery and such. Wait, where am I exactly? I looked around to find a door, and I did. I ran towards the door and opened it, revealing another room.
It looked like it was a living room in hear, with a very short two-seated couch and a brown table, brown floors, a large TV, a kitchen, a fridge, and one of those glass sliders you see in homes, but this one was different, it had large bars covering outside, wonder why? I looked around and saw another door, I ran towards it and opened it, but it was lock.
"No no no..." I said as I kept opening the door, but it wouldn't budge. Hmm, maybe it needs a key. I looked around and tried to find one, until I saw a golden one on the kitchen counter. I grabbed it and use it to unlock the door, but wait a minute? What am I even doing in a place like this? And judging by this room, I say this place hasn't been touched in almost a year or so, considering the dust I see on the table and the kitchen counter.
Hmm, maybe someone will explain to me what happen once I get out of here. I used the key to finally unlock the door and finally got of here, but I was meant with weird results.
As soon as I got out of there, I saw I was in the open fields, nothing much but the grass, the hills, the mountains, and...a forest? This doesn't make sense, I live in a city, so what am I doing in a place like this? More importantly, how did an Apartment complex get around in a place like this anyway?
I turned around, but only to become surprised to see instead of an apartment complex, it was something far unbelievable for me. It was a spaceship, but it seems so small on the outside, but judging by how big the kitchen, the living room, the bedroom, and that secret chamber that I was awoken in, I say it's pretty decent. So wait, I was awaken in a spaceship, but this doesn't make any sense?
Wait, don't tell me? Was I...abducted by aliens?!....no, that can't be true, that's just silly anyway. I mean everyone knows that aliens don't exist, there nothing but fiction. But then again, that spaceship that I awoken is evidence that I have been abducted by aliens. But the ship, it like it crash-landed and haven't been use in..a year or so.
Ugh, stay focus Ren, you need to find some help, hmm, maybe something back in the ship can help me.
I went back inside, hoping there could be anything that could help me, or any explanation on how did I end up here and why can't I remember anything. As I continued to search, I went back to bedroom and looked under the bed, and that's when I found a suitcase, but it appears it hasn't been used as well. Just how long was I out?
I looked inside and...what the heck? Inside the case, and it turned out it was some megaphone, you know, the ones you use in parades, sports games, and such.
I took it out of the suitcase and examined it for a while. "Just what is this thing anyway?" I took a closer look and saw something off about the megaphone, it had some weird dial on it, wonder what it does?
I pulled its trigger, when suddenly, a blue energy started coming off from the tip and shot and destroy the window, only the glass, not the bars covering it. I widened my eyes in shock of this.
"What the...." I was left speechless upon seeing this. Something tells me that this isn't an ordinary megaphone. I noticed something underneath the inside of the case, and took it out.
"Huh? A note?" I raised a brow and read what it said.
"If you read this note, then you must awoken from your slumber and found the Megaphone Hacking Gun. Please, allow me to explain, the Hacking Gun is a special weapon we have developed. It sends out programming codes in an electromagnetic wave, allowing it to hack into target's mechanisms from a distance and many objects, oh, and it can affect living organisms as well. Make sure nothing happens to the Hacking Gun. Always believe in the sake of Hope."
Megaphone Hacking Gun? I've never heard of that before, but then again, why make a weapon out of a megaphone? I can imagine someone might mistake it for a normal megaphone. I looked over the dial and it has something on each of it.
Break
Move
Dance
Detect
Knockback
Paralyze
Burn
Link
Those...were pretty unique names to use on a weapon, but why do I have this? Doesn't matter, I guess I'll explore the outside already.
I put the Hacking Gun behind me and left the apart-I meant spaceship, I still don't wanna believe it, but I still need face it.
Anyway, once I got outside, I looked around the place until I noticed a town. "Oh great, a town, maybe someone over there can help me!" I said full of joy inside of me.
I ran towards the town and enter the place, before I noticed a sign at the entrance. I looked over it and it said "Ponyville", weird name for a town.
"Oooh, are you excited for the Summer Sun Celebration, Bon-Bon?" Huh? I turned around and widen my eyes upon seeing something unbelievable.
Ponies. But they were different, they were colorful, one was a green mint pony, but the craziest thing was that she had a horn. The other was a peach color pony with a black and pink mane and tail, and she seems to be a regular pony like any other would be. But what's up with the one with the horn.
"Yeah yeah, I know you're excited Lyra, and so am I, just calm down." The pony known as Bon-Bon said trying to calm down that green-mint pony name Lyra. Wait, did they just say something?! I looked around and hid behind a bush and looked at them as they entered the town.
"Sorry, it's just so amazing! Princess Celestia is coming to Ponyville for the first time ever Bon-Bon!" Princess Celestia? Who's that?
"Yeah I know Lyra, but I also heard she send someone to go check over the decorations." Bon-Bon said as I began to follow them, but hid away from them out of sight.
"Really who is it?"
"Someone told me it was the Princesses's own protege, and she's from Canterlot." The green mint pony jumped for joy upon hearing that from the other pony.
"Oh that's amazing, well let's give them a warm welcome tonight when we have the chance." Lyra said happily.
"In case you forgot Lyra, Pinkie Pie is already handling that." Bon-Bon said as they continued to walk around the town. I hid behind a building and took a glance and became shocked to see so many ponies around, ones with horns, one who don't and...ponies that can fly. Apparently, I saw ponies with wings flying around through the skies, and I think I saw one, but it was going too fast that I saw it as a blur, weird.
Okay...something tells me that this isn't a dream? Hold on, these ponies, I read about them back when I went to the library, at least that I can remember that.
Those ponies...they're like the ones in that book of Mythical creatures I read. The ones with the horns are called Unicorns if I remember, and they use their horns to perform magic, and the ponies with wings, they're called Pegasi, they have the power to control the weather and fly around with those wings of theirs. Amazing, so I'm in a world full of Mythological creatures, this is so amazing.
Wait a minute, I awoken in a spaceship, then I found myself in a large hill, a town full of mythical ponies, does that mean? I'm...in another world? But how? I don't remember anything at all.
Well I won't find answers if I just stand around and hide away from the crowd, so its best if I just find something that could help me. So I hid away from the crowd and pull my hoodie to cover my face to hide my appearance and began my search.
I had to hide in bushes, trees, houses, in order to make sure none of those ponies see me. Anyway, I hid behind a bush and saw some of the ponies minding their own business, well that's good, because if they saw a human being like me, this will create a panic.
Suddenly, I started to hear singing, I turned around and saw a yellow Pegasus with a pink mane and tail singing with a bunch of birds, and the birds were repeating back on what she's saying. Huh, she must be good with birds. Hmm? I noticed something on the side of her butt, apparently it was a mark of a trio of butterflies? Strange, wonder what's up with the tattoos?
“Oh my. Um, stop please everyone.”
The birds stopped and she flew up to a blue jay, saying, “Excuse me, sir, I just wanted to tell you your rhythm is just a teeny-tiny bit off." Huh? Does she speak with animals? Must be an animal caretaker I guess. Wait, a Pegasus who's an animal caretaker, well not the strangest thing I've seen today.
Floating back a little, she said, “Now follow me, everyone. A-one, a two- a-one-two-three-”
"Hello!" Suddenly, all the birds flew off from that loud shout, which caused the yellow Pegasus to gasp in shock. Wonder who said that? I looked to see a lavender unicorn mare with a...dragon by her side?! So I was right, this world really is inhabited with Mythical creatures?!
“Oh my, I’m so sorry! I didn’t mean to frighten your birds. I just came to check up on the music and it sounds beautiful!” The lavender mare said apologizing to the mare.
The yellow Pegasus looked away from her glance, I guess she's...shy around peo-er, ponies I guess. "Anyway, I'm Twilight Sparkle." Twilight Sparkle? What is that? A name of an ice cream flavor?
"What's your name?" The lavender mare asked. The yellow Pegasus hesitate at first until she spoke up.
"I'm...Fluttershy..." She said in a quiet voice. I think she said her name was Fluttershy. Kinda an ironic name since she's...well she's shy around this pony.
“I’m sorry, what was that?”
“I’m …” she muttered, looking nervous.
“Didn’t quite catch that.”
“Fluttershy!” she squealed almost indistinctly. I kinda feel bad for her, she reminds me...of me.
“Well!” She said, “It looks like your birds are back. Keep up the good work.”
“Mmm!” Fluttershy whimpered.
“Oookay!” Twilight said, gesturing the little purple and green dragon to follow her. Suddenly, Fluttershy noticed the little dragon and gasp in surprise.
"Ooohh! A baby dragon!” She zoomed forward and bumped Twilight out of the way. Wow, for a shy Pegasus, she sure gets really excited for seeing creatures she never seen before.
"I've never seen a baby dragon before! He's so cute!" She squealed in joy.
"Well well well!" The dragon said giving a smug look at Twilight. Wait a minute, the dragon can talk!?
“Oh my! He talks,” The yellow Pegasus was starry-eyed. “I didn’t know dragons could talk. That’s just so incredible wonderful that- that I don’t even know what to say!”
An aura surrounded Spike and he was unceremoniously levitated onto Twilight’s back as she said, “Well in that case, we’d better be going!” Wait, she used her horn to levitate the dragon to her. Well I did read that Unicorns can use magic with their horns, so I guess it makes sense how she levitate the dragon.
"Oh wait, wait!" Fluttershy called, stopping Twilight and the baby dragon, Spike. "What's his name?"
“I’m Spike!”
“Hi Spike, I’m Fluttershy. Wow, a talking dragon! And what do dragons talk about?”
“Well, whattya wanna know?” Spike asked.
“Absolutely everything!” replied Fluttershy, causing Twilight to groan.
“Well… I started out as a cute little purple & green egg..." Spike began his backstory. Well, looks like this will be a long day, so I think its best if I just kept exploring Ponyville.
I looked around to make sure nobody was around and ran off.
Later
It was getting late, so I guess those ponies probably went to sleep. I was walking in front of a giant building, I looked up to see a sign that spells out "City Hall", so I guess they have a City Hall in this town as well. This place is almost like my home, well maybe except walking talking ponies that is.
Well today, I learn some things today.
One, I'm in a world full of walking talking ponies that seemed to be Mythological creatures.
Two, I somehow been asleep inside that chamber for who knows how long.
Three, I'm stranded in this planet, with no way to return back home. My family is probably worried about me, my mom, my dad, my older brother, and my younger sister.
Okay, you need to relax, I'm sure there's a way to get back home, I just know it! Suddenly, I saw a bunch of ponies walking towards the City Hall. Oh no, they might see me, I instantly put my hoodie over my head and ran to the side of the building to hide away from view.
Wonder what's happening in there? Is there some kind of event happening inside? Wait, if I remember correctly, those two ponies from earlier said something about the Summer Sun Celebration. Wonder what that means? Do they mean that they're celebrating the first day of summer?
Hmm, well if that's so, I do want to see what's happening inside, but how do I get in? I looked around and saw a ladder, hmm, maybe I could climb up and see what's happening by watching outside of the event.
I ran towards the ladder and started climbing, but I had to make sure my Hacking Gun didn't fall from me, but it was attached to the back of my pants, so it was good. I continue to climb up until I reached to the top, which the entire roof was made of glass, I just hope it doesn't break.
“Fillies and gentlecolts, as mayor of Ponyville, it is my great pleasure to announce the beginning of the Summer Sun Celebration!” I looked down to see every pony in town were all standing around in excitement.
Everybody cheered in response but quickly calmed down for the mayor to continue.
“In just a few moments, our town will witness the magic of the sunrise and celebrate this, the longest day of the year!” Longest Day of the year? That doesn't make sense? Just how long was I asleep inside of that chamber?
“And now, it is my great honor to introduce to you the ruler of our land, the very pony who gives us the sun and the moon each and every day! The good, the wise, the bringer of harmony to all of Equestria..." The curtains started to open up as we were about to see this pony they were talking about.
"Princess Celestia!" Once the curtains open up, it revealed...nothing. What? Judging by all the gasps all those ponies gave out, I'm guessing this isn't part of the act.
“Remain calm, everypony,” The pony on stage said gently, “there must be a reasonable explanation.” Yeah, maybe she's late or something.
“Ooh! Ooh, I love guessing games!” I looked around and saw a pink mare grinning, like there's nothing wrong. I guess she's too...ecstatic. "Is she hiding?" The pink mare said looking around the place.
"She's gone!" A white unicorn with a purple mane and tail announced from the balcony.
Everybody gasped while the pink mare said "Ooh, she's good." Yep, I was right, she's too ecstatic.
But suddenly, a shimmering haze appear from inside the building. "What the?" I muttered in confusion.
Suddenly, a tall black pony, clad in blue armor appeared. What the?! Who is that? The black pony narrowed her eyes narrowed wickedly as she looked down on everypony, her mane and tail were the haze, resembling a starry nebula, moving as though they were alive, and her mark was a purple mark covering her rump while her flanks were sided by a moon.
Okay, this is definitely not an act!
"Oh, my beloved subjects! It's been so long since I've seen your precious little sun-loving faces..." The black pony said in a elegant yep condescending manner.
"What did you to our princess?!" A rainbow mare pony demanded as she started to fly towards her, but only to be grab by the tail by a orange mare wearing a hat.
The black pony laughed mockingly and said "Why? Am I not royal enough? Don't you know who I am?"
"Ooh, ooh! More guessing games!" The pink said not even scared about what's happening right now. "Um...Hokey Smokes! How bout...Queen Meanie! No! Black Beauty, Black-"
Suddenly, an apple was stuffed into her mouth by the orange mare, who was still holding the rainbow mare's tail with her teeth.
"Does my crown no longer count now that I've been imprisoned for a thousand years?" The Dark Black Pony asked rhetorically, glaring at the yellow Pegasus that I saw earlier ago. She then turned to another pony and said "Did you not recall the legend? Did you not see the signs?" Signs? Legend? What is she talking about?
"I did!" Huh? I looked down to see the same lavender mare walking forward towards the tall black pony. I know her, what was her name again? Twilight Sparkle? "And I know who you are!" Everypony just looked at her in shock, surprise, and confusion, and I was looking at her in all those feelings.
"You're the Mare in the Moon! Nightmare Moon!" Nightmare Moon? With a name like that, she's sound terrifying. Everypony gasped in shock while Nightmare Moon simply smirked.
“Well, well, well! Some ponies who remember me… then you also know why I’m here.”
“You’re here to… to-!” Twilight just couldn’t say it. Wonder what's wrong with her?
Nightmare Moon laughed wickedly as she spoke, “Remember this day, little ponies, for it was your last. From this moment forth, the night will last… forever! Ahhahahahahahahahaha…!!!!!!!!” Night time....forever?
As Nightmare Moon cackled, her vaporous mane rose up in a hurricane, lightning flashing ominously, she stopped and looked up to see....me?!
"Well well well, what do we have here?" Her horn lit up and shot up towards the glass ceiling. Once the attack hit the glass, it started to crack and-
Oh no.
"AAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!" I instantly fell down on the ground and hit my head, ow, and just when it was just starting to heal. My eyes were dizzy, meaning I couldn't see what's happening. After I shook my head, I looked around and saw everypony looking at me in shock, surprised, and fear. Nightmare Moon just looked at me with an interested but yet Eerie expression.
I smiled nervously and waved "Uh...hi there." Well, this is not what I wanted my day to be.
To Be Continued
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Not bad start. Can't wait for more.
Would you like to have an editor? Good start but several grammar errors and you mentioned Nightmare Moon before her name was actually revealed by Twilight
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Oh really? Huh, I seriously need to check over my work, and also, I'll think about that.
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Also, thanks for the heads-up
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Hey no prob. It might be the reason the story has so very few thumbs up and so many thumbs down. I've only read one chapter and it shows promise but the errors are probably getting in the way.
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Yeah, good point, thanks for the help, and I'm still thinking about hiring you as my editor. I'll let you know.
I'm not gonna lie, that story you made is entertaining.
Wait a minute. Was that a reference to Danganronpa? (BTW, I haven't played that game)
Hello, your story looks splendid. I could write this version for Susan Chow’s adopted sister Haley who fought the Nazis of Wolfenstein who got transported to Equestria when she and Susan Chow tried to destroy the portal to prevent the Nazi from annexing other worlds to the Third Reich but sadly they got separated when Brigadefuhrer Franzeska Hahnel and Gruppenfuhrer Fanny Bauer activate the portal for me in Gate: Thus the JSDF Fought There and for Haley in Equestria which occurs as My Little Pony: Haley’s Adventure in Equestria.
It was a cupcake.