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I'm a recently found brony. I didn't think much of the show untill I watches it as a joke, then I was hooked

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It was just a normal day for Twilight that turns for the worse when Alicorns start showing up out of no where. This is parody of those bad OC self-inserts that are alicorns and are very unoriginal and have random clop. Note: no clop in this story.

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...???
trollfic?

I genuinely laughed as I read this, good show.
Have a thumb and happy Derpy :derpytongue2:

Alicorn Rain.
First, they were rare.
Then they're EVERYWHERE.

and that's why i have a brown oc unicorn who is only good at telling time

BECAUSE I WANT IT TO BE FUCKING BELIEVABLE *glares at ponyfags*

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A good ending? All the alicorns were brutally murdered by ponykind and it was never spoken of again.

Ever.

YES THANK YOU! I mean, if someone did go to Equestria, this is what they would do, even if they deny it! :eeyup:

All my yes!!

1020424 Thanks for finding that error, I seem to always do that, and about the ending I couldn't think of anything good, I mean i couldn't let the main cast die

THIS IS WHAT THIS FANDOM NEEDS

SANE, NON-ANGSTY PEOPLE

*Looking at Ponyville burning from a picket fence*
HEY, ALICORNS! EVERYBODY BLOODY HATES YOU!
"Uh, Fleet, aren't YOU an Alicorn?"
Well, at least I was BORN a Pegasus, and I EARNED it!
(Not another bad OC, I swear to god.)

also, this is a very good story.

you are still my favorite author on this site.

OMg that was so amazing lololol this exactly sums up what i think about hie alicorn fics take a thumps up, if i had more then 1 id give it to you :pinkiehappy:

Thank you for pointing out that people make stupid OCs. There should only be a limited number of alicorns, yet everyone always makes their OC an alicorn. They always choose some ridiculous anime-esque special talent, and always make them fucking neon! Do they realize how much of an eye sore neon is? Ponies are supposed to be pastel, not neon!

No Clop? WHAT HAS THE WORLD COME TO?

I really dont know what people are talking about, the only stories i see other alicorns are in Trollfics

I haven't read one Alicorn fic but now I get the gist of them. This was quite good some classy trolling.

Asside from a few errors in syntax, I found this to be a nice, enjoyable, quick read bashing what I hate the most: motherfucking alicorn OC's.

Yeah, that's kinda the reason why I hate Alicorn OC's save for PenStroke's Nyx. And that's also the reason why I have a pegasus OC, as Alicorns tend to be OP'ed.

This Fic. It's not what the fandom deserves, but it's what it needed.

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Do you even know what a parody is? It's making fun of all those stupid OC Alicorns people are always making. People do that all the time and it's almost always horrible, especially because more often than not the people (at least claim to) base the Alicorns on themselves, along with making them completely invincible and breaking canon in every way imaginable.

1025788 And that is what I was making fun of

This guy, this guy has earned my favourite.

Awesome. Just Awesome. (says the brony with a not-ali OC, though still a bit different than regular unicorns)

Good show! Definitely earned my like and favourite. :pinkiesmile:

I got my friend to watch MLP and then we made OCs. I told her that making your OC and alicorn is just stupid and instantly makes them a Mary Sue unless you put a LOT of effort into their stories, but alas, she made an alicorn. :facehoof:

I died laughing RIP Pizza.

To be fair, not all of the Alicorn OC fics suck. MOST do, yes, but not all.

Although in case of The God Squad, she was made a bad OC on purpose, then evolved a personality as time went by. It was rather funny, actually.

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