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Collins4112


I'm a recently found brony. I didn't think much of the show untill I watches it as a joke, then I was hooked

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It's just somthing I wrote while thinking of ideas for Gentle Red. It did not go though the beta reading process so it may be a bit rough. But please read and relax I mean it is My Little Pony after all. This story is also cross posted to my fanfiction account. I
decided to add on to the story so new update.

Summery; Applebloom has some questions about the more adult things in life

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 17 )

I could not stop laughing the entire time. There where a few grammar errors, but i have to get a couple tears out of my eyes from laughing before I find them (does not help I have "F*ck Her Gently by Tenacious D playing right now).

now do one from Sweete belles and Scootaloos perspective

524203 Likewise, I doth implore, for you to follow in pursuit of that course of action! :D

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I will ask for the same adding a pretty please at the end to make it all bether :raritystarry:

That's pretty funny. Rarity you little whore. I can't wait to see what Rainbow told Scoots (so that is a yes, I'd love to see what happened)

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Okay immature me, stop it! :twilightblush:

At first I was like oh no is she gonna do this to poor Scootaloo? :pinkiegasp:
Then I laughed my flank off :rainbowlaugh:

522788 I fucking see you everywhere. O.O Gnomes reign supreme *salute*

It was funny....but how come our fav ponies have to be whores? :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

892711 because it's a lot easier than writing a deep meaningful plot for who they were mateing with. The point was the fillies learing the facts of life

Damn forgot to fave first time
anyway
LOVED THEM
feel so bad for Scoot though

892730 huh, ok. It was still funny though lol.

Rainbow Dash in the first part :rainbowderp:

RAINBOW DASH WOULD NEVER DO THAT, YOU SICK BASTARD!!! :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2:

Big mac moved his sprig of wheat in his mouth the the other side of his mouth.

Mac

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He retted over the the carts and hitched himself to one. He was glad to do some pulling after all it was his strong suit.

what in the heck is "retted"?

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She seemed pretty excited about it. The orange filly didn't seem to the idea."

"Ya'll better keep your noses out of other ponies business. Your remeber what happened with your newspaper." Big Macintosh reminded them. He could almost feel their blushing. "What are ya'll investigating?"

Get rid of the " mark.

You remember
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"Whoa! Now this isn't something you approach casual! If I ever catch y'all with a colt. You won't be swing the light of day for a month.

seeing

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"Ah'm not an expert but I'll tell y'all what I know." He face he was afrain was going to be entirely hot with embarrassment, "When a young filly starts to become a mare she goes through a special processes each mouth. I ain't gonna go into to details but you'll need to know that nothing is wrong with you and y'all be just fine."

Y'all = You all. and is not another way to say you'll

month
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"You you later Big Mac."

See
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Decent chapter. Embarrassing as all get up. I can't wait to see why peeps were angry at Dash.

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