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Noticed a typo.
Need a space between these words: 'shot (which'.
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Noted and fixed, thanks.
So far im interested, however the only thing i could think to ask for is perhaps longer chapters?
Great story! Can't wait for more of this gem. Anon's pretty straightforward in this one,bit too nonchalant for my liking but it's better than iverdramatuc Anon at least. Tho, straightforward Anon might cut down your writing length by the fact that he actually communicates through misunderstandings too quickly.
It's a good start. I look forward to more.