You continue trotting through the forest path, thinking of the many ways you should greet the unicorn if you ever found her again.
'Hello beautiful unicorn! I am a changeling and I have problems with the inside of my body. Can you help please?'
"No way, that's to much of a direct approach, and she's bound to think I'm asking her to mate."
'Greetings majestic unicorn! Ever since I saw you in Canterlot, I seem to be having trouble within myself, and I must acquire your assistance on it.'
"Not only will talking like that give other ponies a headache, it will give me a headache. I'm pretty damn sure she's going think I'm asking her to mate as well."
'Well, HELLO, you sexy bea-'
"AM I EVEN TRYING TO BE SUBTLE?!"
Seeing as how you are having a hard time to think of the perfect greeting for the perfect unicorn, you decide to think about solving other problems first, like names, and your appearence.
"My name... I don't think I have one. Queen Chrysalis never called me anything other than 'child'. Thats going to be weird for introductions. Let's see... name... name..."
And at that very moment, it was like the gods themselves shot down a lightning down to your head, as you had came up with the BEST name ever that anyone in Equestria has ever heard! It was so simple, yet so full of wonders! It just screamed amazing!
"I got it! I shall now be known as... (Insert your name here.)" You exclaimed proudly. SUCH ORIGINALITY!
Now that you solved that little problem with your amazing idea of a name. You move onto the next problem, your appearence.
"Let's see, after that whole take-over plan failing miserably, I'm pretty sure everypony will be alert for changelings everywhere. So here are the possible outcomes if the unicorn knew I was a changeling:
1. She beats me to a bloody pulp, tell the guards, and they take me to Celestia to die.
2. She beats me to a bloody pulp, run away screaming in terror, which the guards will take me away to Celestia and die.
3. She beats me to a bloody pulp and I die.
I just HAD to be evil, didn't I?"
You trot over to nearby lake, taking sips while still thinking about your appearance.
"So that pretty much leaves the option for me to disguise myself as another pony."
You look at yourself in the lake's reflection.
"Hmm... The pony I need to look like should be handsome. But not famous, I'm not trying to bring attention to myself."
As you think to yourself, your body emmits a bright green light around your hooves, and slowly works it's ways up.
"Gotta have a face that also does a good stern look. Can scare away people if I need to. It also has to be lovable, I don't want them to hate me, especially not the unicorn. Also needs maybe some colorful eyes. Yeah, that way the unicorn might like it. Maybe blue? Green? Needs to look excellent. Excellent... Excell... heh, that word sounds weird. Excellent. EX-CEL-LENT. Like exorcism. Wait, why am I talking about exorcism? I'm getting off-tracked again. Why do I get off-tracked easily? What was I talking about?"
You looked at your reflection again. Instead of the changeling skin you had, you now look like another pony.
"Huh... I look pretty good!"
You look like... Actually, I don't even need to describe you. Since this is "Your" story, YOU imagine who you look like now. It can look like your OC, it can look like a car, it can even look like Chuck Motherfucking Norris. Not like its gonna change the story much. So fuck it!
"Now this could probably catch her eye."
Wait, why are you so worried about this? In fact, why are you acting this way towards a pony? A pony that no doubt changed you this way, and also smashed your head in with her soft, plushy hooves... and the way she paralyzed you with her gleaming eyes...
You vigorously shake your head. "All I need to do is ask her everything, and she can probably solve it. Hopefully. No need to get so worked up about this."
Your stomach grumbled, how odd. Your stomach never made any noise before. It meant something though, but what? "Eh, I'll figure it out later." And so, you continue your trot through the forest, having absolutely no idea where it's leading.
--------------Meanwhile in the town called Ponyville--------------------
Something strange is about to come. Something very different and strange indeed... Something is up, and Pinkie Pie knows it.
There stood Pinkie in her home, looking at her tongue in the mirror. For some odd reason, her tongue seems dry, and no matter how much water, juice, soda, or cider she drinks, it still seems dry. She just knew that this has to be one of the "Pinkie sense" signs, but she forgot what dry tongue means. But whatever it means, it's telling her that something strange is coming to Ponyville.
Could it be an incoming disaster? Is there going to be an earthquake? A fire? Are we going to be invaded by a bunch of talking hippopotamus, riding unicycles, carrying paint-guns, wearing chicken suits, and demanding us to give them all of our cheese?!?!
"Nah, that's just silly. Everyone knows hippos are lactose intolerant!"
Another Pinkie Pie sense is tingling! Warm hooves, that meant somewhere out there, a bipedal ape-like creature has just groaned and face-palmed.
"Hmm, maybe I'll go around Ponyville. A little fresh air can help me remember!"
And with that, she sets off, bouncing all the way, while singing a cheery tune.
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To be perfectly honest, I too am at a writers block. I feel your pain brudda .
Still a good chapter though, but I would have liked it if we knew if he chose pegasus, unicorn, or just a regular earth pony.
2004345
Well... maybe you have? Hmm?
It's "You" so you decide! It won't really change alot of shit for the story, but you know.
I like the option of freedom for imagination.
Glad you enjoyed my story!
I like it. Another chapter please.
2004486
Coming (relatively) Soon!
LOVE IT!
2004699
YAY!
Thank God Pinkie dosn't have a sense for when a changling is coming to Ponyville!
I never would have guessed we would be our Oc's,but that ok!
Finally:What the buck are going to say to the purple unicorn about our predicament?!She'll just send us to Celestia,if she finds out we are a changling!
2004721
Well, "You" are semi-retarded, so you didn't really think it through.
I'm working on it though!
2004741
I KNEW my brain didn't feel right today!Well at least we didn't smack into trees this time.
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But what about the roo-AH!BUCKING ROOTS! It has Pinkameda written all over it!
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What was I talking about again?
2004783
I love you, you know that?
No homo.
Hey gamer, try not to be too humble alright? this story is going to turn up awesome and everyone knows it so far from what I've read, your story's perfectly fine
....they just need to be a bit longer
2005064
By using the powers of my over-analyzing, paranoia, AND sensitivity to words, I came up a conclusion of what you actually meant!
*Sobs* you didn't have to mention my mother in this!
(Joking aside, thanks alot. It really means alot to me. :P)
2005071
Yeah I know, 1k chapter stories aren't that popular :P
And by "a bit" I mean A LOT
2005096
Haha, I know
2005102 you know i would be prety much ID(ed?) as a changeling. With A black mane a Black Coat AND Green eyes.
Are you sure the changeling doesn't end up with Pinkie?
Lol I just noticed something gamer can't go on with the story until someone comes up with a name and an appearence for the changeling! Am I right , or am I right?
2006380
Ahahahaha WRONG
2006199
As the AUTHOR and WRITER of this story that I CREATED, and with the Twilight Sparkle tag on the story.
(/Sarcasm) I CAN SAFELY SAY THAT I HAVE NO IDEA (/Sarcasm)
Seriously though, I don't really want to change the story into that :P
PinkiePie has been deployed, now all we can do is hope for the best.
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2010324
Nonono, we deployed to handle the situation, we will use only as last resource or else thinks will get really fast.
2010337
Haha! Ok then.
Glad you enjoyed my story!
2010341
Well, your chapters are faar to short considering update speed, I fell like the story is progressing far to slow.
2010353
My story in a nutshell
Sorry.
Lol make the chapters slightly longer and the wait time slightly shorter. And voila, its better
Ohhhh... now I remember what sleeping dogs is! its that one game that looks like grand theft auto! At first I was like,"Puppies!!!" But then I remembered this video of the game where the main character goes around naked beating people up... I have no idea why I brought this up, I was just checking if this story has been updated yet... WHICH IT HASN'T ...but I do understand that you probably just have personal matters to attend to, which is why you haven't been working on this story lately...
Or maybe you've gotten lazy...
2012486
Latter.
2011794
Not that simple :P
I can't control time like Doctor Hooves.
Awwww lol then just try to make the chapters slightly longer
2013385
Trying my best :P
As long as u are
I like the story so far... except for one thing. A good story focused on a main character explores who that main character is. That means the character has to have a definite identity.
Since the character is interesting, by definition, he already has an identity of his own. Therefore, things like "(Insert your name here.)" and the "You look like..." paragraph just sloppily break the fourth wall (and, hence, break the immersion and cheapen the story) for no gain.
2004378 Well actually it kinda' does I mean if we don't know which species he is then we don't know what he can do essentially limiting him to Earth pony abilities but even then we aren't sure because Earth ponies have larger reserves of strength than other ponies. just thought I'd poke a hole in your logic while I was here, now moving on!
- hard time trying to think of the perfect
- Yes actually considering that I've yet to see someone with either my name or (insert your name here) as their fist name
- She beats me to a bloody pulp, runs away screaming in terror, after which the guards will take me away to Celestia and I die.
- getting off-track again. Why do I get off-track so easily?
Feel free to ignore any intentional mistakes and keep it up, there were much less mistakes this chapter, you're doing great!