Rainbow Dash lives an exciting life and is swiftly becoming the most daring, awesome pegasus in all of Equestria. She would gladly give it all up, though, just to confess her love to Applejack.
"...and I can't help but feel as though... I can change... but it's like I dunno where to start," Rainbow Dash found herself murmuring. The techno music was just as loud as before—the lights just as bright and annoying—and yet she found herself able to carry on a hushed conversation. "I have friends. I have lots of friends. But they can't... understand me, y'know?"
"Of, definitely," Smoke Rings said, nodding. She leaned against the bar counter, gazing softly at Rainbow Dash as the smaller pegasus continued speaking.
"But... I can't blame them." Rainbow bit her lip. "It's all because I've chosen to keep myself so distance, y'know? I mean... I worry about them a lot. And I wanna protect them with all my might. It's all part of being the Element of Loyalty, ya feel me?"
"Sure..."
"But... but it's like that's my burden as much as my joy... and I don't want to place any hardship on them. So... so I just... float, y'know? And... and as lonesome as it sounds, it's... it's something I can handle. Because I gotta handle it, y'know? They don't deserve any of my baggage."
"I'm sure they'd be open to you if you aired your feelings," Smoke Rings said.
"Eh... it's not that simple," Rainbow muttered. "And it certainly doesn't help that for the longest time, I've... I've..."
Smoke Rings arched an eyebrow. "You've what?"
Rainbow sighed. "I've always dreamt that one of them could be more than just a friend."
"Ahhhh..." Smoke Rings nodded. "It's not something that could possibly work out..."
Rainbow glanced aside. "How do you know?"
Smoke Rings stifled a giggle. "Well, you're here, aren't you?"
"Mrmmmfff..." Rainbow sipped up the last of her current glass of cider. "Touche."
"If you ask me, Rainbow Dash," Smoke Rings said, leaning forward and tapping Rainbow's shoulder. "The life you've been living sounds awfully constricting."
"Eh... it's good enough."
"Does it feel 'good?' Are you happy with the way things are?"
Rainbow merely bit her lip.
Smoke Rings smirked. "You're the athletic type... a proactive pegasus. I'm guessing you're adventurous too."
"Heh..." Rainbow rolled her eyes, nearly toppling off her stool from the motion. "You've got no idea."
"I think you have everything to gain from trying new things," Smoke Rings said, patting her shoulder again. "Rather than being stuck in the same place all the time. Go outside your comfort zone. Experiment. I promise that you won't be disappointed."
"You..." Rainbow teetered. "You really think so?"
Smoke Rings didn't answer. Instead, she stammered, "Egads, Rainbow. Has anypony ever told you how silky smooth your coat is?"
"Mrmmf... yeah... sure..." Rainbow smirked drunkenly, staring into the lights and haze. "A few."
"It's like Celestia sliced a piece of the sky and gave it wings."
Rainbow coughed, then chuckled breathily.
"What?" Smoke Rings blinked, giggling as well. "I meant it!"
"That was cheesy as Tartarus," Rainbow muttered.
"Well, I couldn't help myself," Smoke Rings remarked, smiling. "There's something about you that's just... priceless."
"Uh huh..."
"I mean it. And the colorful way you dye your mane—"
"I don't."
"Huh?"
Rainbow gulped. "I don't dye it. It just... is what it is."
Smoke Rings leaned back as if shot by a bullet. "Get out of town... are you serious?"
"Mrmmfff... it's my mane, isn't it?"
"That's... that's just amazing," the mare cooed. She ran a hoof through Rainbow's bangs. "Even feels softer than a cloud."
Rainbow hummed, her nose and lungs filling with the luscious perfume. The warmth from Smoke Rings' touch spread through her neck and chest, chasing the numbness away. Before she knew it, she was leaning into the mare's hoof, nuzzling against her fetlock.
"Hehe... something got you off balance?"
"Mmmm..." Rainbow's back tingled as her wings stretched out on instinct. "...maybe..."
"Say... Rainbow..."
"Mmmm... y-yeah...?"
"... ... ...when was the last time a pretty mare kissed you?"
"Mmmm..." Rainbow gulped. "Let me tell you a few seconds from now." She held her breath.
Sure enough, less than two breaths later, a soft warm pair of lips brushed with Rainbow's.
Rainbow squeaked. Her ears instantly drooped. Something melted deep inside her—far beneath the drunken haze and the numb cloud of her center of being. It was a sensation she hadn't felt in countless years. Part of her flinched, as if expecting something sharp... something blunt and painful to accompany the softness, but it never came. Before she knew it, Smoke Rings was kissing her more intensely. A gentle set of feathers brushed against Rainbow's neck and shoulders. She let loose another squeak, quivering from head to tail.
"Hmmmmmm..." Smoke Rings' voice was a breathy thing, fountaining over her. "Those sounds you keep making are adorable."
"Mmmmm..." Rainbow could only squeak again. "Yeah..." She brushed her cheek in the direction of Smoke Rings' voice.
Smoke Rings nuzzled her back. The air grew thinner, hotter. "Shhhhh... want to know a secret, Rainbow Dash?"
"Mmmmm-what's thatttt...?"
Smoke Rings kissed the mare's ear before whispering, "I absolutely adore perky little pegasi..."
"Mmmmm..." Rainbow Dash slurred. "That's... cool..."
Smoke Rings kissed, nuzzled, and breathed once more. "And I would really... really love to show you a good time..." She tickled the small of Rainbow's neck with her featherips. Rainbow teetered on her stool, sensing a crescent moon grin from across the swirling lights. "...would you like that too? Hmmm?"
Rainbow fought the urge to whimper. She teetered in the direction of the other mare's heat, her heart pounding... pounding... settling. Something flickered in the distance of her mind... pale and isolated... like freckles. Or stars. It all melted, turning black, forming a voice: "That... would be pretty cool as well..."
"Heehee... well then..." A hoof tugged while the voice rolled. Purred. "...let's go somewhere less noisy..."
"Yeah..." Rainbow teetered, drifted, disappeared. "...why not?"
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....the scary thing is, I can't tell if this "Smoke Rings" is being serious, or if she's luring her for some reason.
Maybe we're all just paranoid and she's just a one night stander, but really, the way she was stalking Dash... I dunno, something feels off.
"Smoke Rings", eh?
This is getting slightly suspicious.
Best case: Smoke Rings and Rainbow, idunno, get together.
Worst case: BOOM SHAKALAKA EVERYONE DIES
So many conflicting feelings right now. Ugh!
...
...Um...I have alarm bells going off in my head...
Well, let's ask ourselves what could possibly go wrong.
1. "She" is a "he".
2. She's expecting payment
3. She's a serial killer.
Now, let's ask ourselves what could possibly go right.
1. Dash gets out of her rut via a good rutting .
Personally, I think the rewards outweigh the risks, but that's just me.
7156641 Option 3 is the one I think is the most plausible.
AppleStueryRainbowRingsery
My bet's on Smokey being a hired 'escort' paid for by Vinyl, but either way I'm cool with it.
Her friends are right, Rainbow needs to get laid, damnit! It won't affect her
nonrelationship with Applejack. She's just intensely emotionally crippled and desperately needs something healthy to help her recover.At long last Rainbow can finally find some release, some intimacy, maybe even a healthy relationsh--
*snorts*
Sorry, I tried to get through that with a straight face, but I'm only human. Time to see how badly the train will jump the tracks.
7156637
Those alarms...Do they sound like mine?
7156685 even though sleeping with someone who is intoxicated is essentially rape, but yeah whatever
It's too good to be true. Smoke Rings is a changeling.
I could be reading that wrong, but to me, that seems a little ominous. If it wasn't for the fact that this chick has probably been stalking her, I'd be less worried.
7156678 It is also the least risky for someone like Rainbow.
7156979
Stu is a changelling, Smokey Signs is Chrysallys. I call it.
...
I'm with zaponotar on this one. I feel like she was most definitely paid by somepony *cough* Lyra *cough* to get freaky with Rainbow Dash. Well...at least Rainbow is having a good time.
Suspicious pone is suspicious.
I don't expect this to go well.
I just hope it goes temporarily well, cause this chapter was kinda nice.
She says she doesn't know who RD is, but she doesn't express surprise when RD mentions that she's the Element of Loyalty...
7156678 Especially since this Smoke Rings seems to have been following them all day. That's really not a good sign.
I want to trust her. I want Dash to finally find happiness - in a healthy manner, to boot. I still can't help but doubt SR, despite my hope. Smoke, if you turn out to be a murdering git or Listing Breeze in disguise or something else absurdly probable like that, watch out. I will find you.
PLEASE GO WELL, PLEASE DONT EXPLODE INTO FIRE AND SADNESS.
Smoke Rings kind of reminds me of Ariel, a pegasuses from anudder story who is sweet on Dashiekins.
This Smoke Rings, she doesn't exactly seem above board. I mean, if you saw a guy walk up to one of the drunkest girls in a pub, you'd think he was after an easy target. This feels like that all over. Especially when you factor in the cheap plays. The priceless comment is also getting to me. I think we may have a bit of an issue with a slavery racket going on. Or again, perhaps I'm reading too much into things. But this story has me rattled, I can't help but expect the worst at any given moment.
This is so painful, 'cause there's so many things hinting that this is heading in a bad direction, but I wish so desperately that this could be a good thing.
7157441
Dash probably mentioned it earlier.
I know a song about a man who met a woman at a bar. They had a nice conversation, the girl put something on the guy's drink, and he woke up naked, without his wallet and without his car. The guy fell in love with her, of course.
7157147 They are both the same changeling.
Hrm. Just what are you trying to play here, Colon old boy? I know Appledashery well enough to know that nothing good can possibly come of this, but you're still leading us on just enough to make me hopeful that something might happen. I'm not barmy enough to suggest something as heretical as actual, tangible progress but if Rainbow were to actually get laid—well, something might change at least.
On one hand I'm all "YESYESYES!"
On the other, something about Smoky here is simply too damn suspicious
I'd like to point out that Blowing Smoke is a phrase that means "To speak in a deceptive manner, with the intend of misleading listeners or hiding facts."
Smoke RIngs are something you can blow if you smoke, and have some skill.
Therefore Smoky Rings is a Skilled Deceiver.
My money's on "girlfriend experience" hooker paid for by one of the others
Oh no. No no no no no no no. No
Things are going good. Great even.
Rainbow is happy. And making progress. Which is great. Except that's bad.
I'm scared.
This has just as much of a chance of going well, too, followed by more awkward conversations about why sober Rainbow can't bear to love anyone but AJ and thereby spreading the sadness a little more. But given the situation, what with the recent events, setting, and potential stalking going on, it could just as easily turn out bad without Rainbow's inhibitions causing it.
I wait a whole month so I don't get stuck on a cliffhanger.
And what happens?
I get stuck on a cliffhanger.
...
And the worst par about all this is that I haven't kissed anyone yet in real life and this...this is so...so...
AGkdakldjasjdlsad
*moans* Don't bang your head into the keyboard.
The worst is gonna happen...or the best is gonna happen.
I'm going with the worst. Rainbow Dash is still laughing about this right? RIGHT?
I didn't miss an arc change did I?
You know, the best way this could end would be...
[redacted due to Just Essay prowling this comment section. PM me if you want to know. ^.^]
7157650 Hmm, that would also be a really interesting turn of events. That and changelins wil be my bets.
Anyway, we have one positive thing though, Rainbow being kissed again after so much time is something good that could help her to search for more happy things in her life, even if this ends badly.
Anyway:
So she's followed them all day... and now, after complimenting Rainbow, wants to take her for a good time somewhere quiet...
The Flim Flam brothers hired her to kill Dash! Or she's just the stereotypical one night stander.
No... Smoke Rings is actually Lancie! He somehow manipulated himself into a female equine form so he could get with Sparky for a night and snap her out of her perpetual funk... Lanciedashery. These the "cuddles" we were promised?
Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!!!!
This is gonna go wrong really fast. I can feel it.
Something wicked this way comes.....
Rainbow Dash picks up a prostitute
I trust nothing in this story lol dash cant have nothing nice
THIS IS A TRAP. >:^(
Okay, the optimistic interpretation is that she's just an escort, but seriously, you'd think a prostitute in Las Pegasus of all places could find clients without having to stalk a random pony all day. This mare is trouble.
Anyway it’s cute.