Friday
Rarity cried on Twilight’s shoulder as they both waited for news about Sweetie Belle. Sometime on Monday, Sweetie had gone missing. Apparently, she was seen going into the Everfree with Opalescence by Vinyl, who had been up late preparing for a party that had been going to happen tomorrow. With the filly missing, nopony felt like really celebrating anything, and instead helped with the search effort.
Glancing to the clock, Twilight noticed it was getting close to midnight, and gently helped Rarity to her room. Tucking her friend in, Twilight found herself being held with an iron grip, and pulled up a chair. Levitating out a Daring Do book, she began to read as she waited for Rarity to fall asleep. Time ticked forward, and the moment it hit midnight, a violent earthquake shook Ponyville. Rarity leapt to her feet, and Twilight bolted to the window.
Looking up, Twilight watched as a bright light seemed to shatter the sky like a window, and it hurtled directly for Sweetie’s room. Turning, both bolted toward the door as another quake shook the house. Slamming the door open, both watched as the bright light dimmed, and a familiar face became visible.
“S-S-Swe-Swee-” Unable to speak, Rarity dived for her sister, crying tears of open joy as Sweetie cried out in pain. Releasing her, Rarity looked horrified as she noticed the bruised state of Sweetie, along with the saddlebags that were badly burnt. Looking to Twilight, Sweetie spoke, pointing to her chest.
Magic flaring, Twilight used a common healing spell to heal the broken bone. After a moment, she wiped her brow, and nodded to Rarity, who once more plucked her sister up, crying as she embraced her. Hugging her sister, Sweetie began to tear up as well. Seeing commotion outside, Twilight opened the window, and shouted to the crowd the good news.
Cheers erupted, and two fillies raced up the stairs, diving for Sweetie to join in with the hug. Tears flowing freely, it was a long time before any of them could even form a sentence. Once Rarity was able to speak, the question of where came up all too soon. Looking to them, Sweetie asked what day it was.
“Well, it’s just after midnight on a Saturday, Sweetie, why?” Twilight tilted her head as fresh tears emerged on Sweetie’s face, and she merely shook her head. Rarity and Twilight shared a glance, and Twilight gave a nod. Stepping out of the room, she left to go deal with the crowd. After all, explanations could wait.
They had all the time in the world.
Its after midnight on Sunday....its over?
Shes out of the loop...
Omg I'm giggling. ..
Dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww bout time! She get to keep her cutie mark? Soooo basically the CMC's should be blank flank for less than a week now haha
The greatest thing a looper ever experiences:
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So you know how I'd tell you my favourite loop once I reread them all on that blog you posted? Jumping the gun. The last chapter and this were my favourites. Particularly the conversation about death which hit far too close to home. I'm mortified of it too, and would probably pull a Starswirl if I could. Thank you for giving me words to a feeling that has gone without description for far too long, and thank you for such an incredible journey, Warewolves.
I can see her running around town yelling "IT'S SUNDAY!!!!!" Ranting on about how long she's been waiting for sunday.
Wait... Why is she exiting out ofthisloop, whichever had the Opal + Everfree End? I guess I'll see in the later chapters...Oh... the Opal + Everfree thing was the loop trigger.... Oh...
Typos:
Opalescence
Saturday, Sweetie
Not now you don't. Idiot.
Edit of my L40 comment
Why do I think that even after 40 loops I wouldn't be trying to find a way out? Edit: 120 some loops for me.(warning:contains curiosity)
I can't be the only one who feels this theoretical apathy. I can't say I know why but some reason being stuck in a time loop like this seems like it would be calming to me in a way... maybe I just don't care enough about things?
EDIT: The pain would suck though, and the calming will only last so long.
Obvious difference though being that I have my laptop to loop with, so of course after learning everything I even slightly care about, reading everything, running out of things to watch, doing all things that can be done within the same 5 days, and exploring interesting outcomes for actions it would become monotonous. Then again the writings of someone who has had so much time would be interesting to create... even if they vanished from... how would the internet work? would it be like Homestuck and let me skype with other loop me's?
Before someone mentions it: Death loops would suck, but individually perhaps I could grow a fear of it. Someone tried to kill me once and I just didn't care... I'll be honest it was almost fun.
I still think I would be cool with a week time loop being me... Do I have excessive apathy or curiosity? Why do I sound emotionless everytime I describe myself, but not when other people do?
Loving the story BTW :)
I have so many chapters left to catch up and I am looking forward to it.Edit: I don't know any more. If I don't know the out... probably not taking the offer. If I do... lets loop.
Can someone please explain what happened in L100? I have this internet-protection blah blah blah thing that blocks it and I'm DYING to know what happened in those 6400 words...
6251915 Battle between Starswirl and Sweetie basically. Will it allow you to download the chapter?
I'm so happy now :D
Now me heart has stopped beating fast XD
But, horses don't have feet?
(Crashes into Vinyl's bed, bounces off, and lands on the couch, knocking it over)
Yep, I'm fine, thanks for asking people!
(A paper airplane flies through the window. It says, "Sorry" when I open it up)
Damn stars.
Best story I’ve read so far on FimFiction. And I’ve read some really fucking good ones. Holy shit my mind in blown from how good this story was and still is. O_o 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉👍👍👍👍👍👍