“SISTER, the front gates have been breached! The castle will be over run in minutes!”
“QUIET! I know, I watched as they killed the guards, they’re taking no prisoners. Luna we must leave, but not right away.”
The room echoed with deafening silence, reverberating throughout the castle, as faint blasts from the outdoors made their debut. Celestia was leaning against the wall, she was weightless, and had lost all ability to carry on from here. Laughs could be hear from outside, sick, twisted maniacal laughs, as blasts of green flew across the sky, and fire blazed across Canterlot.
“Sister… I have no solution to this issue, but I must insist that we act qui-”
“What was that?” Celestia interrupted.
“Pardon, Sister?”
“Who’s laughter is that?”
Celestia and Luna ran to the window, from there they watched in awe as Discord sped across the sky, striking enemies out cold with magic and chaos. However, not a single more that injured, just unconscious.
“What is he doing here!? He’s meant to be looking over our people in the new world! Does he not know of the new weapons the Griffons have!? Their technoqlogy is far too advanced for us! Canons the size of straws! It’s devastating, no magic can combat it!” Celestia yells, with both anger and fear in her voice.
Discord turns to the window and winks at Celestia. Griffons start to fly in at him, surrounding him, and Changlings come from the bottom, trapping him in a circle of enemies.
“HAHA! You think it’ll be so easy to capture me!?” He cackles.
The Griffons raise their machine weapons, and the Changlings begin to charge their magic.
Discord continues to cackle in hysterics at this attempt to intimidate him, he raises his hand and his single fang glimmers with his mischievous smile.
“DISCORD HELP!” yells Celestia as dozens of Changlings burst into the room.
Celestia fires off her magic at them, incinerating many into a purple ash, filling the entrance to the room with violet smoke.
CRASH
SNAP
Trails of smoke emerge from the violet mist as balls of iron and brass rain from the rooms entrance.
Claps of thunder fill the ears of Celestia, as her eyes shut tight from the shock. Eyes still glued shut she feels something warm against her chest. A great weight in her chest, and liquid dripping down her coat.
“NOOOO!” screams Discord in unharmonious agony.
Celestia opens her eyes, and stares at the blood staining her white coat, and the wounds before her.
“L-Luna.” She says.
Luna lay against her sister, littered with blasts from the machines of the Griffons.
Almost unrecognizable from the blasts, face covered in blood, eyeless as the balls of iron had replaced them. He jaw unhinged and dangling by a tendon. Ash and singes riddle her body from the holes left in her.
“Sh-She saved me… Goodness, why!?”
From the mist a figure approaches, initially shadowed by such smoke. A large Griffon, red in colour, uncovers himself from the mist. In his paw a war machine, long, and red like his fur, he raises it at Celestia.
“Goodbye Sun-Bearer, your cosmic tyranny ends now.” Says the Griffon, in a loud pronounced shout. His grip tightens and his finger press against the trigger of his machine-
BAM
“GAHHH!”
Discord grabs his eye in pain, “YOU FOOL! THAT WAS MY FAVORITE OCULAR VIEWING ORGAN!” he yells as he grabs Celestia and
Poof
He vanishes from the room.
Leaving only the Red Griffon, and Luna in the Castle.
“W-Where are you taking me Discord?”
Celestia says, her soft quiet voice rather noticeable in the tunnel of space-time.
“To where I took the others of course. You’ll be safe there.” Discord says calmly, still gripping his eye, blood flowing inconsistently from the wound. “First though, I want to tell you something. To help you. Something I realized when I was in the stone.”
Discord turned towards the wall of the undefined tunnel of space-time.
He emerged in the void, and flew slowly, taking in the vastness of the void. Distant bubbles everywhere, with thousands of little bubbles surrounding them. All linked to-
One
Large
Black
Sphere
“This is void, my darling, and that is the Main Realm. The only un-visit-able realm. You can only leave it upon death, never to re-enter. It is the mother of all realms, yet has no knowledge of them. Ya know, in the void you can always see it, no matter where you look? It’s a little maddening at first but you get used to it.
The realm I sent the ponies to is a good one, not perfect, and certainly not clean, it’s a step down in overall condition and cleanliness, but overall it’s very toughening and well rounded. It’s like going from a school arts and crafts lesson to the mud pit, it’s a bit of getting used to.
The people there are fine, probably more accepting then ours, so maybe they can all learn something. However, I think we can teach them all something to.
But enough of that. Let me tell you about what I think of our world. And now, of theirs.
One can only dream of how many people there are out in this world, and that world. How many people will listen to what you have to say, and actually be there when you need to say it? How when people are there for you, you just keep spilling confessions. Everything around us is just a sticky mess. Everything is glued to the next event, everyone is waiting for the next piece of debris to latch onto, and to be carried off with it, somewhere else. Anywhere else.
Who doesn’t want to be somewhere they’re not. It’s all just so cliché, can anyone really be fully satisfied with what’s given? Because we all want the next thing on our mind, which is rarely in the right place.
Right here, right now, we should just look up, and walk over to the best view we can get of the sky, and just think. Just how lucky we are, that there’s this invisible force gluing us to an Earth so vast and beautiful. Sometimes we just forget about it. But sometimes we also need to focus on the beauties of our lives. The simplistic beauties of love, and happiness, and sorrow, and depression, and of all other emotional comprehensions. Because the beauty of emotion is so vast, and expanding. It drives us to do great things, it’s what keeps us human and bonded to one another. The beauty of hate, and resentment. The beauty of good and evil. It all creates an amazing balance, an incredible equilibrium of an emotional collage that can’t survive the same without all its components.
It’s all very odd.”
“Discord, I don’t know what to think anymore.”
“That’s alright. I’ll do that for now. I can see it’s time for me to calm down a bit and re-organize. I will, but only until you’re on your feet, deal?”
“Deal, Discord.”
Discord smiles at Celestia, and looks out at the Main Realm. And then at the small, grey bubble, where Kit and Rainbow are having Chemistry class… unknowing, uncaring.
If only they knew… Too bad they will know soon… one way… or another…
IT'S FINALLY HERE!!! Not too long, but i finally had time to do it! Funny, i found time in the ugliest stage of the divorce, and i got it done!
Well i hope you guys like! Touching Rainbows is now off hiatus, and back in full swing, SPREAD THE WORD~!
Took you long enough, bud!
This is probably my favourite story, I'm anxious to see it continue.
love it :D
This chapter, holy crap
LLLLLLLLUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! All things considered interesting chapter. I am excited to see where this goes.
Sweet been waiting for this chapter pretty good sucks for Luna though
How dare u do that to Luna! HULK SMASH!
You found time to do this during your divorce? :(
LLLLLLLLLLLUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Luna... oh no... Luna...
I stil wonder, in this story, "we" (readers) are not in main realm right? And again, Why Luna!!!!??!!?
Ps. there is something, you wrote, sometimes "he" where this is not makng sense to me, like instead of her or him, is this some mistake you often do, or it mean something? (it may sounds weird, but there are so many versions of English language... it is confusing.)
Send a Human army to Equestria. Preferably a mix of American, Canadian, and German. Americans for size and overall experience. Canadian for our fucked ability to do just about anything when we really try. And Germans because we all know that if they were allowed they would have already made fucking Laz Rifles and Bolters... and then say, "Kill all the Griffons, Changelings, and whatever else is attacking Equestria." When they get there they'll see the carnage, and go "We've seen worse." And if the griffons (plus rest) start killing prisoners, and the Canadians find out, God have mercy on them for they (nor Celestia) will not... And the really scary part of this all is the fact that this is all proven by history.
2112366 actually you are the main realm. like, this is the main realm and we cannot leave until death
2112366 if it's a mistake like that, it may just be a reading error, or it was one of my more abstract writing methods! :D this chapter was all about the abstract
this.
this was beautiful.
I LOVED IT.
oh my.
it was great.
well worth 2 months.
now waiting for the love story.
HAHA, my best friends favorite character is Luna, I am telling him all about her getting shot!!!
Btw I'm very glad to see this story back on my favorite notifications so and I hope thing get better for ya bud
2119516 my bro's favorite is Luna too haha! (not genetic bro lol)
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welll... thank you for responding, I still don't beliwe that you were actualy able to nterest me so much in anthro story. It means you are really great.
and... when what you wrote is similar to my idea about multiverses, only now I noticed similarity to never ending story. so I do not remember well. So, in your story do we have any influence on what happen(like, we create those words) or we are only watchers (we receive what happen, and this is effecting on our imagination)?
2121301 we create those worlds and universes, and then through our art and creations we see stories and events from that world. we set the stage, and start it all, then we watch ("watch) the world progress and carry on
Dat Discord soliloqui and those quantum and string theory feels
All in all good chapter
2129147 that comment, baked me hard... dude... soliloqui... i don't even know what the means... dude... deep shit man....
2130674 haha a soliloqui is basically when one character talks for a long time
2137853i thought that was a monologue ._.
2113941 why no:
1: Main realm cannot be left
2: other realms have no knowledge of the war, as Discord stated
3: don't want to lol
glad you're into it though lol
2111631 well, my parents divorce haha im only 16! but yes, i found some time haha
2150077 I'm not saying the main realms armies, I'm saying the armies of the realm they put the ponies in. That realm is the same as the main one just without My Little Pony, right? I could tell you right now If this happened here, including the no My Little Pony, I and many others would willingly fight to help the ponies... If we knew about the war though. As well I basically worshiped the moon BEFORE there was My Little Pony, so if I ever found out that A goddess of the moon was killed, god have mercy cause I won't, and I am a very good shot.
Finally a new chapter. Y Luna hafta die?
2151645 k
2152775 reasons
2153453 u sir are giving me the feels and I don't like it.
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Monologue and soliloqui are the same thing just from different roots
Soliloqui comes from latin like eloquent or circumlocution
Monologue is from greek like dialogue (surprised ) or I want to say logic but not sure
I am great with anything latin related but fall flat on my face with greek
2153451 Just wanted to explain it
2154340 sorry i was responding to a different comment >.< my bad
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2166845 if the griffons got guns does that mean they got portals too because they need portals and come here so we can kick their butts for 4 things. 1 starting a war in Equestria. 2 allying themselves with the changelings. 3 killing Luna. 4 bringing their war to us.
2166881 well they've developed primitive weapons around like a little above the gauge of weapons in the War of 1812, so they don't quite have enough technology to reach Kits realm. however, they do have the Changlings...
2172655 gah. I need more so I can guess wat will happen.
2173900 ya know what... I think I'll finish the chapter tonight, just for you :) expect it tomorrow morning (around like one or something lol)
2175649. Yay. I'm so excited! Whenever I hear that say it or think it I think of Mole from the Disney movie the Lost City of Atlantis. Anyway I got school tommorow. Screw it. I'm staying up to read this chapter. I need MOAR!!!!!!!!!! I humbly thank u for finishing this chapter for me. I would give u a mustache but I'm using my kindle to do this so I don't know how. Lol. Best of luck. May the pony way be with u.
I request you send me in the story with outcast power armour and the same weapon the griffans are using to avenge my fallen Princess Luna
I WILL MAKE THOSE FUCKERS PAY FOR THEIR HERACEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...I'm quite confused
Oh God no.. not Lulu
How dare you. How fucking dare you. You just killed the best fucking alicorn in the goddamn show! I demand vengeance! I will not stand for my Princess being killed! I wish I had read this when it first came out so I could say, put me in the goddamn story to avenge Lulu. She doesn't deserve death, but alas there is many more chapters to be read and I doubt you will resurrect my dear Luna. Long live the night!
So they killed her huh.
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Sometimes a violent purge is the only answer
And here is a song to go with it.
They shall know war
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NLR FOREVER! WE SHALL RISE TO RAIN THE FULL UNHOLY FURY THAT IS THE NIGHT
Author.. I will end your life... painfully and violently for killing Luna... normally. But I know everything in a story has a purpose. I can only hope that in the end every single one of those who were in any way involved in Luna's death suffer so horribly they WISH their ancestor's had never even THOUGH of having children. Their pain must be long, drawn out and above all they MUST SUFFER!
luna...........sigh
stay classy
My god. You're lucky I liked this story before I read this chapter Otherwise I would have gone to your house and murdered you slowly for killing Luna
Just kidding... Or am I?
*cries in the corner*