A group thousands of years old now stands in the shadows of the modern day. With one young-ling of their up bringing making head way on new grounds. But what will the journey do should he waver.
That may have been my job. Unfortunately, I've got a plate full of personal nonsense that I'm still trying to eat, so I haven't been able to find time.
7786653 Sorry I took so long to replay as for edgy if your talking about gore or anything that wont come until later and in small amounts. Worst is a Griffin being turned into a slave in the first one. Second one you just meet the known leaders of the different chapters. I have a whole bunch of notes if you want to read them.
So far the story is very interesting (i have vague ideas of how 2 of my OCs might belong in the universe, but need to read the other chapters to be sure if they were civilians or members of the group)
11408162 I’ve dropped this story but to put simply each chapter operates individually from another. They have a shared agreement not to directly mess of influence others. The major difference is one’s drive to dominate. So if one is strong willed they’ll be fine among the members. If one is weak willed then they will be turned into a slave.
11411627 i saw it and ok, interesting. The 2 OCs of mine are normaly strong willed but with the right triggers can be weaker. The first one is the pegasi in my profil pic, which is normaly a luna night guard and the other is his older sister which is a unicorn with a very rare illness (but you dont want mess with her, because she secretly learned black magic nearly so perfect, that she has her own eye veil if she used it).
If you want, i can send you a pm with more information about both
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Yes I spread out the story and put in the right tags.
You should, at the very, very least, have the description go through an editor.
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What's wrong with it?
7785912 Many typos and misspellings. Using "their" when you shouldn't.
That may have been my job. Unfortunately, I've got a plate full of personal nonsense that I'm still trying to eat, so I haven't been able to find time.
Before I read it, how Dark does it get ?
Whoo! 10/10 Edgy.
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Sorry I took so long to replay as for edgy if your talking about gore or anything that wont come until later and in small amounts. Worst is a Griffin being turned into a slave in the first one. Second one you just meet the known leaders of the different chapters. I have a whole bunch of notes if you want to read them.
7786836 A, ok
So far the story is very interesting (i have vague ideas of how 2 of my OCs might belong in the universe, but need to read the other chapters to be sure if they were civilians or members of the group)
11408162
I’ve dropped this story but to put simply each chapter operates individually from another. They have a shared agreement not to directly mess of influence others. The major difference is one’s drive to dominate. So if one is strong willed they’ll be fine among the members. If one is weak willed then they will be turned into a slave.
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i saw it and ok, interesting. The 2 OCs of mine are normaly strong willed but with the right triggers can be weaker. The first one is the pegasi in my profil pic, which is normaly a luna night guard and the other is his older sister which is a unicorn with a very rare illness (but you dont want mess with her, because she secretly learned black magic nearly so perfect, that she has her own eye veil if she used it).
If you want, i can send you a pm with more information about both